love it. xD so cute. the girl and guy are total opposites. she talks so much. xD but great. really great story~!

That was really cute! I love it. Made me smile.

I like it.

ALOT.

:D

Big satisfied smile xD

perfect match. haha. love it.

This was just as cute as your other one-shot, if not cuter. Your characters are just so fun to read about. And I especially liked this story because it wasn't cliche and because it was just so great. I'm at a loss for words about how I really feel, forgive me. But I really loved this. And I can't wait to read more of what you have.

I love this story! It's so cute, and I like how it's not too fluffy or overdone. And I also loved the part when she asked if she was dead when the guy held up the umbrella over her head. lol. Great job! :)

I liked this! It was really sweet. Her talkativeness and his silence was just the most adorable fit. :)

Aw That was so adorable! I loved reading all of the things that she rambled at him and he was really sweet to listen to it all. hahah *sigh* I wish things happened like this in real life. Uh hehe, anyways, good job!

I actually had this story on bookmark for quite a while but never really got around to read it due to my exams and studies and blah.

But I finally found the time to sit down this morning, and just read, word for word.

And I'm glad I did.

Loved the originality of the story, darlin.

And I kinda like the guy. The whole head-patting thing reminds me of something a guy I used to like when I was in uhm, primary school did. Hahaha.

Well done, love! :)

Definitely different, but really cute and quirky! Great job :)

-Aria

Aww, that was really cute. It was very original, the ending was really nice.

Also, I loves the Batman and I loves the Twilight. And now, I loves your story.

Aww awesome. I like how they don't just decide to get together wham-bam. I do have to say your writing is a bit like her talking (almost like incessant chatter), but it's entertaining and fun. (: Props to xoxluurve for adding this to our c2. (:

oh...nice. Very good idea...I love it!

Maybe you should do a sequel...like when he starts talking to her...lol.

Ri

I love it! The female protagonist really reminds me of myself - a clumsy chatterbox ] This was really a great one-shot. Nice job :)

Aww... *tilts head* I decided to read this too _ because I like your writing style.

This was cute, though the main character reminded me a bit like the ditzes in a shojo manga. :)

But other than that, it made for a really cute read! It was sweet and to the point.

I thought it was cute at least... _

So sweet... reminds me of a book I once read... forgot the title... but it reminds me of it... (the title had "stars" in it...)