Reviews for The Night
Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Nice imagery!
Looking for Bliss chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Ooh. Its rather creepy but beautiful to. It says a lot in only three lines.
Awesome Albino chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Ew cool! This poem is a bit eerie! I loved how you used the word "arise"! Nice!
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I've never been a haiku person, but this one was really good. Well done. Keep writing.
deletekthxbai chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Thank you for pointing me towards this haiku! I see what you meant when you said that ending each line with a similar type of word makes the whole thing flow better.

Haiku's are nowhere near my strong point. Thanks for the help.

Decoris Verbum chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Really liked this one. Nice work, keep it up.

papermask chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Very pretty. I like this.
Needa S chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Cool! Beautifully written. Thanks for the kind suggestions on my new poem and for adding me on your profile page. I made some changes to the poem as well. I hope it sounds better. Write on and God bless.
ShockingReality chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I liked this one. i could picture the night you're describing, and it's not easy to write something like that when you've only got seventeen syllables to work with. Very good work
Gem Kitty chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I love nature haikus! Well done. I like how the haiku expresses night as the awakening of a different world. When most of us would be falling asleep in our beds, a different world is just waking up.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Interesting. The last line seems to contrast with the first two, feeling much more ominous. Good job.