OMG! It was so cute! I loved this story! Jess is absolutely adorable and Kevin sounds just about perfect! Awesome job on the story!

WOW...Wow!

I hope you never take off this story.

Hi! I really liked your story. She was so funny and he was so sexy and mysterious. Glad they got together in the end and hope that the really did live happily ever after - silly, right? Because they aren't real, but ...

Hahaha, that was fun :) I got a little confused during the shooting bit (was someone else holding her? I thought Logan was holding Jess, so I thought Logan died-but yes, that manoevre was clever :D cold-hearted, but clever). I enjoyed the story :D thanks!

is it just me, or is chapter five and chapter three the exact same chapter and there's one chapter missing? *cries*

WELPS, great story so far! i'm gonna try read on and fill in the missing chapter... :( i love jess's personality!

*scowls*

Logan is such an ass.

Also, Kevin? Did he *honestly* expect her to wear her to wear the necklace after he pulled his 'I'm ditching you to marry someone else' stunt?

*shakes head*

He's such an idiot.

*grins*

She may be ditzy, but I love her already.

I could never trust Kevin again. I would be like, I know you're gay, Ryan, but we're getting hitched. Bwah ha.

But anyway.

This was amazing. I actually was like, I'm going to read the first chapter of this just to get a feel and then go do my homework (which, btw, i really need to do. I suck), and then I was totally sucked it. AMAZING, as I said!

I'm gonna go to your profile and look at your other stories and your favorites now in hopes of finding something else equally as AMAZING to read!

-aka.

ohh myy god!(insert girlish high pitched squeal here),,its was so adorable,,i was grinning like an idiot when i finished it n i swear i saw my sister giving me weird looks whenever i started laughing too loudly,,u shd totally try n get it published ,,loved it,,keep up the good work,,u have a future as a very entertaining writer,,loved kevin(insert dreamy sigh)wish i had one for me too,,just continue writing ok,,.

Not only was this a lovely, sweet story. But it was written really well too (: There are some stories that would we fantastic... If they were written better. Haha, it makes me wanna go date some mafia boss. ;)

really sweet story, i extremely enjoyed reading it!

wow wow wow i love this story! haha with the whole mafia business and everything! amazing job!

! Great story!

soo cutee loll :)

aw I love the end so muuch. AH its awesome. the entire story..is love...

:D