|Reviews for One Year Stand|
| Lady of Confusion chapter 21 . 10/21/2009
| MistressBlack852 chapter 21 . 10/18/2009
LOVED this story! thank you so much for writing it! it was so worth not studying for midterms :P
ah i'm sad that its overr, but what a GREAT way to end it...
yess logan was actually god! i knew it hehe
:O logan and ryan? nah... maybe? lol
| MistressBlack852 chapter 20 . 10/18/2009
you scared me with the first part of the chapter! i thought jess died! and then kevin leaves! :O most melancholic chapter ever..
(ah i should be studying for my midterms!)
| MistressBlack852 chapter 19 . 10/18/2009
i agree with jess, i don't like scary logan... but he made up for it in the end lol
but :O kevin shot jess?
| MistressBlack852 chapter 16 . 10/18/2009
so ben kenza is absolutely hilarious... and i have no clue why lol
whoa logan's necklace totally saved jess! hm i think i was wrong about logan lol :P
| MistressBlack852 chapter 15 . 10/18/2009
the necklace idea is so awesome lol
i love this story! :D
| MistressBlack852 chapter 13 . 10/18/2009
whoa! logan sounds like bad news lol
and the end of the chapter was so unexpected... broke my heart just a little bit for Jess lol
| MistressBlack852 chapter 11 . 10/18/2009
omgosh this is one of the cutest stories ever
| silentscream4luv chapter 21 . 10/18/2009
| hug11kiss chapter 21 . 10/8/2009
I loved this story! Although I kind of wish that there was an epilouge. But I still love this story so much!
| TumbleWeed23 chapter 21 . 9/28/2009
squel...ah...aw...i want this! I WANT THIS...I want a guy like KEvin...this story represents my fantasy of love and marriage and all that which i've had ever since i was little...awwhwhwhwahahah...:D
| Kilye M chapter 8 . 9/25/2009
I really don't mean any mean-ness at all with my comments earlier, I really am liking your story very much. As for the immaturity thing, I wouldn't mind being immature like that once in while when I'm 26 too! It just kinds of contradicts her profession as a doctor and the whole one-night thing, I think. By the way, in the last chapter, do they really take photography and anthropology in med school?
| Kilye M chapter 6 . 9/25/2009
Oh I'm still holding out that Kevin is joking about being a mafia boss, like when he said he was a cop. I may not know a lot of mafia-related people... well none really, but I highly doubt their personality would be quite that... cute? I enjoy reading about him none-the-less, a very fun character, just like Jessica. Which reminds me, does she have to be 26 and/or does she have to be a docstor? I don't think she can be both because, unless she's highly precocious, a 26 year old would still be in med school. I also feel a little misleaded when Jess says the boys at med school were just out to break her heart, there were two and then a gay guy, so three. From the way it's written, I just thought there would be more... and not to keep criticizing and being a meany but I would think a 26 year old, not to mention a doctor, would be a little more mature? she acts like a 12 year old kid on a sugar high all the time. Not that I don't enjoy reading about her, or about
Kevin, because I do. But I'm just a little bothered by the details... I'll just try to ignore them for the remainder.
| Yellow.Jellow chapter 2 . 9/24/2009
Very cute. Jess's antics are very very amusing, makes her sound... a lot younger than 26. a little confusion with the 4 year olds?
| pinkguppie chapter 21 . 9/15/2009
It is a very well written story. Are Malfia bosses really that well known?
Your characters were very well constructed; flawed enough for it to be easy to relate to them but perfect enough to be a romance story.
Well done :)