Reviews for One Year Stand |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Kevin is superhot. _ Dangerous mafia men are so darn appealing.. *drools* UPDATE SOON! New fan. lovelovelove, poop p.s. that... logan fellow better not sweep her off her feet. he sucks. kevin's hotter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Does that intimidate you?" He asked quietly. I thought for a second. "For every man that has died at your hands, I will save a child, and make sure that he grows up to be a good person." He seemed surprised. Then he hugged me tighter, "Thank you That gave me goosebumps, I have to say i was expecting some overly cliched line, but I didnt mind reading this. ) I love your stories, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh it's getting more permenant and YES Logan's away :D It was all so romantic, he's so fallen for her..she's just in denial. Look how he talked about his parents woulda liked her, adorable. Lisa is funny, the voice of reason that you really don't think (and definately shouldn't) listen to :) He keeps breaking into her house, cute...in a stalkerish-mafia way. I loved the bit as the beginning about locks :D Can't wait for the next chapter and am extremely excited about possibly getting an update a week ! |
![]() ![]() ahh... excellent yet again and i'll hold you to the weekly updates ;) (if you ever feel the need to update two or three times a week, well that would be ok too) :) |
![]() ![]() See the only problem with this story that you have here is...I read it too darn fast. I wait for it and I'm always done within 2 minutes. Sigh. Give me more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh this is such a cute story, I love your style! I hope that you work on developing your characters a little bit more and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! i read everything that was posted in one go! i think your doing a fantastic job - PLEASE update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it... but I need you to update! Please? |
![]() ![]() Love it. Update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() so they want to check out if kevin has feelings for her and vice versa? if she is important enough to keep an eye on |
![]() ![]() omg! this is a good one! jess is a little - what is the word (or words) - she just don't notice things does she? but i like this fic alot! can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey this is a nice story so far i like how it progesses along though maybe you could ease Logan's involvement in a bit more gently because it's kind of weird with him suddenly appearing and then taking her to see his friends- maybe you should clarify that a bit more. Anyways really nice story im putting this on my favourites coz its really good. Please keep updating i'll be eagerly waiting for the next chap |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm liking this story, you have some very funny characters. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, your stories always cheer me up. Keep writing please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thnx! |