Reviews for One Year Stand |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO. God, I laughed so hard when Kevin said, "It's 8:29. You're early." LOL. Seriously. I was chewing on some ice and it, like, slipped out of my mouth when I started laughing! :( :P At least I didn't choke on it, right? *gasp* What is he doing there? aah! I wanna read more! Now. please? :P hah. j/k. No pressure. O.o Cookie? It doesn't even have to be home baked. I'll take one from the store. I'll leave it in my car for a few minutes so that it's all soft and melted-ish-y... (huh? lol.) hah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, hah. That kind of sucks... that they guy she liked was 'rooting for the other team.' LOL. It's pretty funny, too. :P omg. this line was great "...they just happen to be trapped in a scandalous outfit they don't want other people to see." :D He came back! Er, I guess it would be better to say.. :D He went to see her! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahahahaha. The story at the beginning was hilarious! I loved the way she (you, I guess) explained it... "Tantalus was tight with the gods..." lol. oh. LOL! When I read this, "Oh effers." Oh, man. I laughed so hard! ahha. I'm still laughing about it, actually. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL. It's funny that she calls her mom 'mommy' when she plans of begging for forgiveness, but when she mentions her mom's wrath she calls her 'mother'. :P Ouch. That sounds painful, dropping a plate or your foot. ow. "...Mr. Lee will not be your next one." Uuh, no he didn't! :) *jaw drops* "You are not a suitable wife." Whaat? That's kind of mean. What. a meanie. hahah. o.O ooh. lol. A duel, huh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() much better. i thought that hunk was going to be a paid escort for the night. Some girl's going to be quite upset tonight... |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh la la. i wonder who it is... ho ho ho. haha, can't wait to see what happens next chapter~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I absolutely love this story. Hope you can update this soon :) |
![]() ![]() FYI: If she were a practicing doctor, she'd have to be way older than 26! Even if she did a 7 year program straight out of high school, she'd already be about 25. For her to be a pediatrician, which I think she is, if I remember correctly, she'd also have to do 3 years of residency in pediatrics to be a qualified doctor. Thus, she'd be about 28/29. And that's just right out of school! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and I CANNOT wait to read the next one! What is Kevin doing at that club? And is he the least bit jealous? And by the way, I like your characters. Not every story has to be filled with angst and drama and complete seriousness from beginning to end-keep up what you're doing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter so much! However, with a cliffy like that, you definately should update soon! Keep going, this is such an amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cute. I love this. Love the cucumber dress. Do you have an image of it? LOL! I will keep reading...but first, I need to get some sleep :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crap! Don't tell me it's Kevin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED THE CHAPTER! And Missy This one took awhile so I will eat my cookie and not even say thankyou SO THERE! Update within a week or Kevin lees brother will come after you |
![]() ![]() ![]() o kevins jealous! at least i hope so but then he is way too cool to let that show. he might totally remark on it later.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can just imagine Kevin. *sigh* Heehee. |