Reviews for One Year Stand
Pione chapter 8 . 10/28/2008
OMG! I like this story! :D Keep it up! :D
buzzgirl37 chapter 8 . 10/28/2008
Made me laugh in the morning :) though its midday so i guess its not really morning i'm just lazy...

Anyway on the immaturity comment, yeh sometimes it's a little off putting but on the whole I love it, the story wouldn't be as great as it is without it.

Ha he's so a stalker :) but a stalker I'd like. He likes her, he likes her ... !

Can't wait for the next chapter
JZK chapter 8 . 10/28/2008
lol, jess is pretty funny. Does she live on her own?
mammu chapter 8 . 10/28/2008
I love this story. I'm looking forward to the next one...

I don't think it's a bad thing that Jess is so immature, it makes the whole story funny.
Anna Moretti chapter 8 . 10/27/2008
On the contrary, i like the immaturity. It's kind of appealing in a funny sense.
daling chapter 8 . 10/27/2008
i lovee it!

its great!

please update reallyreally quickly.

hehe. xD
victoria chapter 8 . 10/27/2008
oh... i love the ending, but only if you update sooner rather than later. I understand what everyones saying about the immature thing, but it honestly doesn't really bother me, its a fun light hearted story. i do just wish you hadn't rushed her emotions so much. Its a little fake. but anywho, overall im digging it.
Mell8 chapter 8 . 10/27/2008
She's adorable! I was laughing the entire time I was reading this. Well done!

I know you're just at the beginning of the story but I thought I'd mention that I'd like to know if there's going to be some sort of deeper plot? Kevin did call in a favor to be at that wedding...why? Is Jess going to get embroiled in some sort of Mafia scheme?

Anyway, I really like your story, so please update soon!
bananamilkshake chapter 8 . 10/27/2008
oo... haha, it was quite funny, that part where you wrote that kevin can make a girl orgasm with his stare. that was a pretty cool line... lol...

anyway, can't wait for updates! kev must have watching her for a pretty long time... i just wonder whats going on in his mind sometimes. and whats his life story...
g chapter 8 . 10/27/2008
Maybe I missed it but I thought Kevin drove her to work. If she caught a ride with him, how did her car get there so she could drive home? Anywho, I love the Jessica's immaturity at this point. She's full of humor and what's not to love about people who can make you laugh.
In Love With Your Love chapter 4 . 10/27/2008
LOL. Of course she jumped out of the car as it was going 40 mph. Who wouldn't? Only a sane person would think staying in a car with a mafia boss for a few minutes longer while the car stops is way better than jumping out of a moving vehicle. :P

and why was he going 40 mph in his driveway? Isn't that a little fast? It's kind of dangerous... well, he is a mafia boss... Danger must be his middle name... omg. Did i just say that? bleh. :]

hahhaah. I love this line, "I'm taking a bath and there's nothing you can do about it!" LMAO. Truly hilarious.

heh. He's watching her as he eats a yogurt. lol. Yogurt is gross. :P

" to work..." hm. What's in the job description?
funnechick chapter 7 . 10/26/2008
Haha...I love that she tried on that outfit right before he came over. Great timing.
Jennnyxx chapter 7 . 10/24/2008
update soon :]
violet-eyez chapter 7 . 10/22/2008
funny stuff
In Love With Your Love chapter 3 . 10/21/2008
"Does no one want to dance with a lonely cucumber?" :( aww. That's so mean what her sister had on the menu!

:) I loved the poking scene. Where he ignored her. lol. I poke people to get their attention... and sometimes they ignore me. Meanies.

O_o. Oh. oh. Mafia boss? _
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