| Reviews for One Year Stand |
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   Pione chapter 8 . 10/28/2008 OMG! I like this story! :D Keep it up! :D |
| buzzgirl37 chapter 8 . 10/28/2008 Made me laugh in the morning :) though its midday so i guess its not really morning i'm just lazy... Anyway on the immaturity comment, yeh sometimes it's a little off putting but on the whole I love it, the story wouldn't be as great as it is without it. Ha he's so a stalker :) but a stalker I'd like. He likes her, he likes her ... ! Can't wait for the next chapter |
| JZK chapter 8 . 10/28/2008 lol, jess is pretty funny. Does she live on her own? |
| mammu chapter 8 . 10/28/2008 I love this story. I'm looking forward to the next one... I don't think it's a bad thing that Jess is so immature, it makes the whole story funny. |
| Anna Moretti chapter 8 . 10/27/2008 On the contrary, i like the immaturity. It's kind of appealing in a funny sense. |
| daling chapter 8 . 10/27/2008 i lovee it! its great! please update reallyreally quickly. hehe. xD |
| victoria chapter 8 . 10/27/2008 oh... i love the ending, but only if you update sooner rather than later. I understand what everyones saying about the immature thing, but it honestly doesn't really bother me, its a fun light hearted story. i do just wish you hadn't rushed her emotions so much. Its a little fake. but anywho, overall im digging it. |
| Mell8 chapter 8 . 10/27/2008 She's adorable! I was laughing the entire time I was reading this. Well done! I know you're just at the beginning of the story but I thought I'd mention that I'd like to know if there's going to be some sort of deeper plot? Kevin did call in a favor to be at that wedding...why? Is Jess going to get embroiled in some sort of Mafia scheme? Anyway, I really like your story, so please update soon! |
| bananamilkshake chapter 8 . 10/27/2008 oo... haha, it was quite funny, that part where you wrote that kevin can make a girl orgasm with his stare. that was a pretty cool line... lol... anyway, can't wait for updates! kev must have watching her for a pretty long time... i just wonder whats going on in his mind sometimes. and whats his life story... |
| g chapter 8 . 10/27/2008 Maybe I missed it but I thought Kevin drove her to work. If she caught a ride with him, how did her car get there so she could drive home? Anywho, I love the Jessica's immaturity at this point. She's full of humor and what's not to love about people who can make you laugh. |
| In Love With Your Love chapter 4 . 10/27/2008 LOL. Of course she jumped out of the car as it was going 40 mph. Who wouldn't? Only a sane person would think staying in a car with a mafia boss for a few minutes longer while the car stops is way better than jumping out of a moving vehicle. :P and why was he going 40 mph in his driveway? Isn't that a little fast? It's kind of dangerous... well, he is a mafia boss... Danger must be his middle name... omg. Did i just say that? bleh. :] hahhaah. I love this line, "I'm taking a bath and there's nothing you can do about it!" LMAO. Truly hilarious. heh. He's watching her as he eats a yogurt. lol. Yogurt is gross. :P "...off to work..." hm. What's in the job description? |
| funnechick chapter 7 . 10/26/2008 Haha...I love that she tried on that outfit right before he came over. Great timing. |
| Jennnyxx chapter 7 . 10/24/2008 update soon :] |
| violet-eyez chapter 7 . 10/22/2008 funny stuff |
| In Love With Your Love chapter 3 . 10/21/2008 "Does no one want to dance with a lonely cucumber?" :( aww. That's so mean what her sister had on the menu! :) I loved the poking scene. Where he ignored her. lol. I poke people to get their attention... and sometimes they ignore me. Meanies. O_o. Oh. oh. Mafia boss? _ |