Reviews for House of Cards
marthamckensi chapter 12 . 4/9/2009
I absolutely love this story..

Spent the last day or so literally absorbed in the goings on of layla and keegan and now the plot thickens. I'm hanging on with bated breath for the next chapter

You're a really great writer, look forward to being thrown into the rollercoaster that's to come.


esssjay chapter 12 . 4/9/2009
this storys awesome :) or at least so far..wens tha next chapter coming up ? i have no idea if yor like some who take FOREVER to upload buh hope its sometime son !
daydee chapter 12 . 4/7/2009
'But what’s really going to cook your noodle is just who the father is …'

when you day it like tht, it makes it seem as tho you're trying to through us off guard, making us think it's vinci, but it's actually keegan.

or maybe you're trying to make us think tht, and make us think tht tht is not wht it is.

sorry, tht was quite confusing. but i think you get my point p

anyhoo, update soon

mika chapter 12 . 4/7/2009
Ack poor girl! That's the worst worst possible news at the worst possible time. When it rains, it pours, you are quite right ;)
anisa chapter 12 . 4/6/2009
hey um yeah i love it but i really want to know who the father is!do you think you could tell me?unless your gonna deliever the news in a shocking im pretty sure i know who the dad so yeah love the story keep updating
blurrylights chapter 12 . 4/6/2009
Oh my god, is the father Vinci? That would be...absolutely terrible? I don't even know, wow. This is crazy, but still kind of expected. Poor her, though. :(

Update soon!
LYNSEY chapter 12 . 4/4/2009
Wonderful story! I can't seem to tear myself away from it! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! :)
Lil dancer x chapter 12 . 4/4/2009
OMG layla is pregnant O It better b kee's or I'll die from disappoinment..but but but they broke up and kee's away ( R u gonna let us know about the father of the baby soon or r w gonna die from curiosity ? D u r good at it .. u roc sweet ! x btw plsplspls try to update tangled soon ;)
akaCHEEKS chapter 12 . 4/3/2009
oh my god! i was excited when she found out she was pregnant! i just knew she was going to get a baby on the way with how she and keegan have been going at it. not to mention the other dude. sorry i really don't wanna name him. but then i read your author's note.. and no! please don't tell me its him! please tell me that its keegan's kids! c'mon! this is torture! i refuse to acknowledge that it might be vinci's kid! no no no no!
romanceistheish chapter 12 . 4/3/2009

I totally wasn't expecting that. First of all I want to applaud you on what a great job you are doing writing. The story line the characters, everything is just great. I really like the way you write. As soon as I read Thirty Days, I was hooked. I told my friends about that story and they all loved it! I wasn't planning on starting this story until it was completed, but I couldn't wait.

On to the update. She's pregnant? Oh, I wonder whose baby it is. Hopefully it's Keegans. I really want to see where you're going with this.

Anyway, I can't wait until you update, hopefully it'll be soon. Keep up the great work!
dramaqueen89 chapter 12 . 4/3/2009
Assfuck Vinci CANNOT be the father.

Please let it be Keegan :(

Btw. This is such a sad story.

Maiia A chapter 12 . 4/3/2009
OMG! Pregnant! Please let the father Kee... not Vinci! I dont even know what to say after that chapter... wow.. I am speechless... So good... I thought the "make up" between Layla & her dad was a bit short... & I like Svet! Why are you lettign her go back to Russia? I like her the best out of all the collegues... & I dont want Lay to forgive Vinci at all... that was such childish behaviour on his part... & whats gonna happen with this pregnancy... how soon will we find out who is the father... please please please dont let it be Vinci.. .that would be too cliche... & if it is Kee's how is he gonna even find out about it? Aw man i wanna know what happens! Please update soon! :-D
dramaqueen89 chapter 8 . 4/3/2009

So maybe I like Keegan more.

That shower scene was hot :

Keegan jealousy fun fun fun :)
Ladyface chapter 12 . 4/3/2009
Oh Layla. That's a very big boo-boo.

I can't wait to see where that goes!
heavengurl899 chapter 3 . 4/2/2009
yay what a cute chapter. Hiring your peers is never fun because it's hard to be the boss to your buddy (I should know).
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