I'm sorry to hear about the recent plagiarism with Thirty Days ( Hope you're ok.

wow.

i expected this, but this still managed to take me by surprise. i'm just...i don't know what to say. i think it's best lol, if i just sit back and read.

i'm relieved, though that keegan still loves layla. though there really never was doubt about that, but it's good to have the insurance. phew, major reliever.

again, like your other chapters, especially your last few, i really like the new edgy vibe...and i think this chapter was just before, or the start of everything, really.

i really liked reading the action-y stuff. and i'm curious to see how deep and dark things go. right now, it's like i'm on one of those scary, thrill rides in the dark. i can't see much around me, and i almost rather not. and i can feel everything shifting and changing...and then just around the bend, there's the drop.

hope mid-terms weren't too terrible :) hel-lo summer.

eagerly waiting for an update soon.

OMG!that woz so addictive!

please update soon. this is my favourite story ever... also, when is Keegan going to learn about the baby? Also, is it his or Vince's?

Hen xx

hm...

i don;t know which one you should finish first. i mean, both are so interesting. you get to choose. but just for me...you should write both of them :0)

I LOVE THIS STORY!

My entire day just seems to revolve around my anxiety to come home and read your story!

And every chapter leaves me craving for more!

I love it and i hope you'll write more fast!

Just letting you know that I love this story, and am excited for your next update!

Omfg this story is the shit! I know that you have another story that u r writing right now but it should so wait because this story is awesome! Keep up the good work and please please update this soon because I don't think I can wait that long!

i just wanted to say that i love your story! they never cease to surprise me! i just wanted to ask whether it was dmitri whose picture they saw that day at the house... and when are you going to update? can't wait to find out more!

Dear Em,

Please tell me you won't pull your stories out. Some of my favorite authors have been pulling off FP and I'm not sure how I'm supposed to get my online reading fix if you left too :X

Anyways.. just a random note.

NED MORE

as much as i need water and food and shelter i need more of this story

P

hope you're having as much fun creating it as your readers are having reading it

"Twin spears of pain and guilt stabbed him just as sharply as any blade. His eyes automatically dropped to the blood-caked floor, the nails and the teeth. It hadn’t been the first time he’d watched teammates being tortured to death in front of him. But ever time felt like the first."

just something i noticed. the last sentence the "ever" should be 'every'?

anyhoo

keep on keeping on

-

Reader

Is the baby going to die? Wouldn't the 'whatever what was in the syringe' affect the baby somehow? Just wondering. Great chapter. I totally feel for Keegan.

This is amazing. U really need to update this asap. It's great

But I hate ur cliff hanger

Update soon

X

Ah! I hadn't realized there was a sequel to 'Thirty Days' until I stumbled upon this! I've just read it all in one sitting, I love it - I think Layla will be a great mom, is that weird? - and I can't wait until you update!

OHMYGOD! I love this sequel! XD XD XD XD I couldn't stop reading it...even when i should have been doing homework. You are such a good writer, can't wait for the next chapter. X )

As fabulous as the first story.