Reviews for House of Cards
Lia chapter 14 . 6/3/2009
I'm sorry to hear about the recent plagiarism with Thirty Days ( Hope you're ok.
xMoose chapter 14 . 5/31/2009

i expected this, but this still managed to take me by surprise. i'm just...i don't know what to say. i think it's best lol, if i just sit back and read.

i'm relieved, though that keegan still loves layla. though there really never was doubt about that, but it's good to have the insurance. phew, major reliever.

again, like your other chapters, especially your last few, i really like the new edgy vibe...and i think this chapter was just before, or the start of everything, really.

i really liked reading the action-y stuff. and i'm curious to see how deep and dark things go. right now, it's like i'm on one of those scary, thrill rides in the dark. i can't see much around me, and i almost rather not. and i can feel everything shifting and changing...and then just around the bend, there's the drop.

hope mid-terms weren't too terrible :) hel-lo summer.

eagerly waiting for an update soon.
deathanddawn chapter 14 . 5/30/2009
OMG!that woz so addictive!

please update soon. this is my favourite story ever... also, when is Keegan going to learn about the baby? Also, is it his or Vince's?

Hen xx
daydee chapter 14 . 5/30/2009

i don;t know which one you should finish first. i mean, both are so interesting. you get to choose. but just for should write both of them :0)
BriBreezy123 chapter 14 . 5/29/2009

My entire day just seems to revolve around my anxiety to come home and read your story!

And every chapter leaves me craving for more!

I love it and i hope you'll write more fast!
Joelynda chapter 14 . 5/28/2009
Just letting you know that I love this story, and am excited for your next update!
Goin-to-Cali-bby-10211994 chapter 14 . 5/28/2009
Omfg this story is the shit! I know that you have another story that u r writing right now but it should so wait because this story is awesome! Keep up the good work and please please update this soon because I don't think I can wait that long!
Trish123 chapter 14 . 5/28/2009
i just wanted to say that i love your story! they never cease to surprise me! i just wanted to ask whether it was dmitri whose picture they saw that day at the house... and when are you going to update? can't wait to find out more!
Lia chapter 14 . 5/24/2009
Dear Em,

Please tell me you won't pull your stories out. Some of my favorite authors have been pulling off FP and I'm not sure how I'm supposed to get my online reading fix if you left too :X

Anyways.. just a random note.
Reader chapter 14 . 5/24/2009

as much as i need water and food and shelter i need more of this story


hope you're having as much fun creating it as your readers are having reading it

"Twin spears of pain and guilt stabbed him just as sharply as any blade. His eyes automatically dropped to the blood-caked floor, the nails and the teeth. It hadn’t been the first time he’d watched teammates being tortured to death in front of him. But ever time felt like the first."

just something i noticed. the last sentence the "ever" should be 'every'?


keep on keeping on


Nothing.But.Aubrienne chapter 14 . 5/22/2009
Is the baby going to die? Wouldn't the 'whatever what was in the syringe' affect the baby somehow? Just wondering. Great chapter. I totally feel for Keegan.
Flaming Skys chapter 14 . 5/21/2009
This is amazing. U really need to update this asap. It's great

But I hate ur cliff hanger

Update soon

Joelynda chapter 14 . 5/20/2009
Ah! I hadn't realized there was a sequel to 'Thirty Days' until I stumbled upon this! I've just read it all in one sitting, I love it - I think Layla will be a great mom, is that weird? - and I can't wait until you update!
Georgia chapter 14 . 5/19/2009
OHMYGOD! I love this sequel! XD XD XD XD I couldn't stop reading it...even when i should have been doing homework. You are such a good writer, can't wait for the next chapter. X )
Secret-Lives chapter 14 . 5/18/2009
As fabulous as the first story.
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