Reviews for House of Cards
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
Okay so no glimmer of hope. I can deal. For now.

But what's this about you THINKING you MIGHT give them a happy ending? I swear, if you kill them off, there will be some major damage done. hahaahaha

I really liked this chapter and it was nice, for once, to see Keegan show some sort of emotion for Leila. I'm almost cringing to see what they're going to go through but she's a strong girl and he's already been through so much, so I think they can make it. Together.

Update soon! Tangled is such a good story but it does seem a little funny to think about it after reading this. Every time, I read some Tangled and I go, this is a great story. And then I read this and Tangled flies out the window and seems so meek and tame in comparison.

Paradigm08 chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
Can you please stop? No not the excellent writing, but the cliffhangers! This one hasn't been as bad as the others though. Poor Keegan! I definitely didn't see him being captured as well and I will admit that I got shivers at the image of teeth, nails, and blood on the floor. I have faith Keegan will get her out but we all know the bomb will drop when Layla will come around to admitting her pregnancy, especially when she reveals that she doesn't know who the father is. It's going to be a WTF moment. I can feel it haha. You've done it again, Em. The story hit an all new high point. I look forward to your next update as usual and for god's sakes, can Layla and Keegan stick together for once? haha. good work :)
Maiia A chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
wow! That was awesome & intense! i was on the edge of my seat the whole time. The return of Keegan! *clebration ensues* I hope nothing happens to the baby... all these drugs they are using on Layla cant be good. & how could someone do that to their own nephew... thats just wrong... Please let them be able to rescue Layla... i dont even want to think about what might happen to her if they have to leave her behind... not that Kee would ever do that unless he got dragged away kicking and fighting... I feel so bad for Lay tho... all the drama in her life... she really needs to have a good break after this kidnapping... marry kee.. have his baby... run a billion dollar corporation... live happily ever after... lol ... make it happen! lol... as usual the chapter was very well written... keep it up... dont leave me in anticipation too long :-)
mary-pi chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
Thanks for the update! That was a great chapter.. too bad Layla couldn't finish her love declaration. Aw well... there will a next time (hopefully).

And the drama continues, right? Oh keegan thanks for rescuing me.. btw, i'm pregnant! oh, and I love you! ha! I know it's not going to happen like that.. but a girl can dream.

See ya! oh! and update soon please :)
abc123 chewy chapter 14 . 5/7/2009

i was super excited for this update

and i read it, and was like, OH MY GOSH

i need more]

can't wait for the next one too!
Devilish Kisses chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
What to say, what to say asides from this chapter was great (as usual)! I really hope that Keegean and Layla escape safely and that she gets out okay with her baby in good condition as well. Update as soon as you can!
music-is-love10 chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
Loved it and I am really glad Keegan's back. And I assume we're going to see more of Vinci? Update Soon, I love this story. :)
layne chapter 14 . 5/7/2009

This chapter was the best in either of the books thus far. Please update soon :]
chiquita chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
I'm absolutely in love with Keegan and I'm happy to have him in the sotry again. The only thing that bothered me about the chapter was that they kept saying 'senora' instead of 'senorita' (tilde over the n). Layla's not married so she wouldn't my 'Mrs.' Same idea in Spanish. :)
Oyuki chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
*screams* you did say it was going to turn dark. but i was not expecting this! and his uncle. how could he not have known? or suspected that someone was watching them? ehh! i'm just thinking, what's all the drugs going to do to that poor baby. and OMG he doesn't know she's pregnant! and that it might not be his! you just made it so that i can't sit still for the next chapter. how are they going to get her out? they have to. tehran will do unspeakable things to her if they leave her. oh, please, please have more soon!
xiomara209 chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
Even in the sequel this man keegan is still a the drama bt would love more info on keegan..
Mynmsths chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
OMG! I need to know whats going to happen next like now so whou really cares about midterms I mean seriously its not like that they really count for anything... but yeah so you'd better just write like now because i freaking love your story to death...
Priscilla Shay chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
Okay, so a couple of things. In regards to your review reply…you better be thinking about a happily ever after! Lol, jk, but I hope she does get her HEA.

Now, on to this chapter:

1) I love the beginning, how you phrased her waking, awesome image. Your author’s note said you have an English degree, but can’t do anything with it (boy, am I learning that fast), I honestly think you should edit/revise and maybe try to get your story published.

2) People really have a penchant for kidnapping her, using food against her, blindfolding her, and taking her off road.

3) I’m glad she’s getting protective of the baby, it shows she did grow from “Thirty Days” and she can think of others, but then, lol, she didn’t really learn much from Keegan since she keeps cursing at Tehran.

4) So, they went from the little cottage in Louisiana to Colombia, right? Then, Tehran is Keegan’s ..uncle? I don’t if I’m mixing it up with the name of the city, but Tehran seems familiar. Was he mentioned in Thirty Days or part of Keegan’s little band?

5) I…think…that baby, if she holds it to full term, might have a lot of complications….

6) Yay! He’s back. I’m still a little mad at him, but he’s back so I’m happy for now.

7) I definitely understand the ‘can’t help but write’ thing. It’s like you have work, you know you should be doing your work…but then, the story pops up and won’t go away, so you start writing to satisfy the urge. But, then, it keeps going and going and going…like the energizer bunny!

..How is my reviewing? Is it getting better? I’m taking a tutoring/editing class right now (for my English degree, lol) and it’s kind of forced into me now. I have the need to offer better reviews that would somehow be helpful. Was I helpful? If I wasn’t, be honest!

Keep going, love it

romanceistheish chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
Wow, talk about action packed. Great update, I love how you made Tehran Keegan's uncle. I really hope Layla ends up okay, and I really wonder what Keegan's reaction will be when he finds out that Layla is preggers.

Great update as always
Elyssa Morales chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
Okay, so Tehran is Keegan's nephew, and Keegan is actually part Spanish? I thought he was Irish. Forgive me if I'm a bit slow on this...
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