Reviews for House of Cards
Resplendence chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Btw a Happy Belated Birthday to you! I hope you got plastered and had a lot of fun. ;)

Finally the sequel to Thirty Days has arrived and it did not disappoint. This chapter I have to admit is very hot and heavy (I wouldn't mind trading Layla's place for a day or two). I can't wait to see the other characters come into play, especially another cat fight between Layla and Leanne. We also can't forget Jack and his perverted ways.
eternalserenity chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
i cant wait for the darker and grittier layla and keegan sequel! it is lovely so far. such a teaser too!
Brilliant Demise chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
And it finally arrives.

Great so far. Can't wait for more.

I'm dying on the Tangled end. Please save me!

Happy belated birthday!

Brilliant Demise
Geeky Punk chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
great great great start! you're an awesome writer! keep updating!
Operationiva chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
HAPPY ONE DAY LATE BIRTHDAY! You're the best present giver ever! You knew exactly what I wanted! :)

Your Fan,

Operationiva
Kadekksys chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
YES! She's back! OMG. this seriously just capped the perfect day: 5th row seats behind the visitors dug-out today, watching my favorite sports team EVER pound their huge rivals down, the start of the Olympics, AND the beginning of what I hope will be another all-time favorite story! yay! :P

Exactly how long after 30 Days does this take place? Jack/Tobias. heh. I'm glad he's back. nvm- two months. :P

Ugh. The double name thing is gonna drive me nuts. Request: use the names from the first one? Pretty please? haha ;)

and last but not least, happy birthday!
Aragorn is mine chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Heya

It's so cool you posting this up and everything... I have to say though I think I like your other story better, I mean I like the characters, Tess and Adonis, better. But this seems promising so yeah... well update soon and

Happy Birthday!
hippi926840 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
E

i didn't know you were doing a sequel!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

did you know, your bday falls on the day the olympics started?

and 8 is an extremely lucky number in china, so thats a good omen for the story doncha think?
thatcrazychickcindy chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
HELL YES!

My favorite story is back with a vengence!

SCORE!

_

Thanks for writing.

XD
liVe-yOuR-fAntAsy chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Happy birthday! haha. So glad you made a sequel! Update soon!
Randall K chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
OMG! When I saw this in my inbox I almost started screaming out loud! What a great first chapter! What a great title! I can't believe your writing a sequel! I'm so excited! You must udpate ASAP!
Efreisone chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I loved Thirty Days, so obviously I'm interested in where this is going. And I am all for dark and gritty.

My only problem with this chapter is the crap about the name. I realize you had to introduce it somehow, but it was none too subtle. I mean, maybe it'll slip Layla's mind now and then, but I doubt she'd forget it entirely. It's kind of a huge deal.
Jaeiyola chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I'm so excited. I love Layla and Keegan. )

Have a great birthday!

And I can't wait for the next update.
AMM3485 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Yay! I'm so freaking stoked! I love Layla and Keegan! Woho, sequel time. I can't wait for the next chapter. You totally rock and happy birthday!
Quozo chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I'm interested in how this story will turn out, because I hope that Layla will get her happy ending (of course). However, I feel like it's sort of unrealistic, given that the authorties will most likely find out about what they [Keegan and Layla] have been up to. And I doubt that her father, the public, or the people around her will understand why she loves Keegan.

Anywho, I am anticipating your next chapter.

Hope you have a great birthday! :)
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