Reviews for House of Cards
nvme5 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
First of all HAPYY BIRTHDAYY! :D

And secondly, AMAZING! Especially the amounts of times you mentioned 'sex'; lolI can only imagine the amounts of times they actually had sex. Haha.

Very promising start.. Ohh, they are the perfect couple, not that any couple is really perfect, but the fighting, makeing up, cuddling is perfecto. Realy nice!

Ah, now,about Keegan/Liam's past, like you said, the question does revolve in one's head, I can wait [Not that you give me any choice ;)] There, and now you gotta update soon :D
broken-and-bruised chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
you are freakin amazing! I dont read stories before their finished but i make exceptions for yours. lol
bridgette261 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for writing a sequel :) I've been waiting for this for a while and I hope it works out. It looks really cute and I just can't wait for the next chapter. THANKS AGAIN! :)

Izabel chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Ah, finally! I just love your stories. Keep writing :)
atreyu love chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
a sequel~

im ready for the grit :D haha.

but please have them end up together

at the end, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

today is my aunts birthday too :D

haha. anywhoo, im in love already.

Nick Wright chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Well, I am certainly excited about this new story! It certainly seems like the characters have changed a bit, and I'm interested to see why/how.

There were a few sentences in here that seemed a little clunky, like "he grabbed my cheek, not the one on my face" (I think that's what the line was). But, altogether, that doesn't matter, because THIS IS THE SEQUEL TO 30 DAYS.

Also, if you're thinking of self-publishing these using one of those publish-on-demand companies or something, I'm always up for editing. D
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