Reviews for Duty Isn't Everything
momo3069 chapter 20 . 8/17/2010
Sweet story! I did vote for it!
Country Princess chapter 20 . 8/16/2010




love i

love it!
AndItMovesUsAll chapter 20 . 8/16/2010
This was a sweet story which was enjoyable to read, i like the way it played out, the plot was good and your characters made for an intersting relationship. However i still dont feel like i know them that well, as in it was harder to get completely sucked into the story i think because there wasnt enough writing about the characters thoughts and feelings- you got the surface emotions, but i feel that if you went into that a little deeper it would have been more intense. I guess what im saying is i wasnt convinced when a character was angry or sad, it didnt make me feel what that character was going through.

Sorry for the mostly harsh review, i really think this story has loads of potential, (sorry that sounds really condescending) the situation and the characters you created were genius i just think it needs a little more added here and there to give that depth, so that you experience the hearbreak as they do.
SparklingStar25 chapter 20 . 8/2/2010
That was such a sweet story...! I adored it..!
Too Much Info chapter 20 . 8/1/2010
You are an amazing writer.

Great story.

Short, sweet, and to the point ending. Love 'em.
mizgardenia21 chapter 20 . 7/9/2010
I loved this story. I adored Grace (personally I think she stole the show ). Awesome job.
ZackLove chapter 20 . 7/6/2010
That was a cute story.
Merest chapter 20 . 6/23/2010
AW! We didn't get to hear about Alec getting raped for dropping soap or...or slapped by someone in the jail cells? COME ON! LOL

Merest chapter 19 . 6/23/2010
GREAT chapter and I hope the judge kicks his-ahem. I love the chapter. :)
Merest chapter 18 . 6/23/2010
( Alec needs to be chaining to wall and whipped, HARD...allow me...
Merest chapter 17 . 6/23/2010
I knew Alec was bad news. Darn it all! Great chappy -rubs temples-
Merest chapter 16 . 6/23/2010
UGH! This has Alec written all over it...
Merest chapter 15 . 6/23/2010
Great chapter!
Merest chapter 14 . 6/23/2010
Merest chapter 13 . 6/23/2010
DAW! Aren't they just adorable! I loved this chapter!
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