Reviews for The Last I Love You
thewonderfullevan chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
wow Delilah D haha thats funny. but seriously you write like a pro. i mean after 30 seconds i didnt see the words it was like a movie wow you should seriously go to a publisher.
Zenia chapter 2 . 12/5/2008
Hidden Flowers chapter 2 . 10/23/2008
Poignant, touching, very heartbreaking.
inkybetterdays chapter 2 . 10/22/2008
I'm still crying. Life has a funny way of going about things sometimes. And I still can't figure out if it's for better or worse.
inkybetterdays chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
I'm in tears right now, and that's a hard thing to get me to do. So sad. So beautiful.
dreeachann chapter 1 . 10/21/2008

This made me cry so bad
xoxo1 chapter 2 . 10/21/2008
omg, seriously, that just gave me goosebumps

i loved how you wrote it, & it was just so amazing

there is one mistake in chapter one though

instead of choking, you put chocking

just letting you know :]

keep up the awesome work

Hidden Flowers chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I applaud you for writing something so exquisite.
Lyssa O chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
Oh my darling little cousin wrote such a heartwrenching story! Your story reminded me of an author who wrote Young Adult stories about people with chronic and terminal illnesses; Lurlene McDaniel. Her stories were always sad, but heartfelt, just like yours! Maybe you've heard of her? If not, I had a book of hers, but I'm not sure if I have it or if someone borrowed it. But you should definitely check her books out.

You know, at some point while reading the story, I forgot that it was written by you-but in a good way! It read maturely and I'm proud that you're growing as a writer. Ah you're growing up. Oh the misery of waning childhood. But oh the joys of entering teenhood.

You did a good job! Yay! Love you!
Michalay chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
D I agree with the two reviews below me completely and honestly.
CountryGal17 chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Oh my god. That was really good. it was so sad! I'm gonna go cry and be all depressed now. haha just kidding but really good job. You are very talented.
rachelaine chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Good job, you made me cry. I literally had to stop at the end to wipe my eyes so I could see. Seriously, this was very well written. I know it's not real but I want her alive, just for a little longer at least. Haha. Not sure exactly how you'd continue this but I'd LOVE it if you did. Anyways, I'm babbling. Great job.