Reviews for Forbidden
Another Loser in Love chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Another wonderful poem! I just have one comment though, you don't have to agree with me on this, but I think maybe you should look at that one line, "That I get a sweet kiss from you". I think maybe it should say somthing more about maybe sharing a kiss, or recieving a kiss. But you totally don't have to listen to me about that! That's all that really came to mind though...still it's a great poem and I really did love it! Keep on writing! You're amazing!
DarkRose1593 chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
This is absolutely beautiful.
Katie Saychiadu chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Very nice and emotional! Take this as a compliment: I think your best writing is with poems. They're lovely - really!

Sorry I've been away from online for awhile but I'm back and I was so excited to see you posted something new. Keep up the excellent work. Oh, and no writing contests yet, but maybe you should enter one? :)

Katie
blurrylights chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
This is beautiful. The description of her agony and her hope were very well done. You did an excellent job. :)
Tapioooca chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Yeah. I've definitely been there before.

Beautiful poem, Colleen. It made me a bit teary-eyed.