|Reviews for A Broken Promise Leads To A Broken Person|
| SingLikeNo1IsListening chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Hi. I wouldnt leave her so hopeless. I mean, make her remember somthing that she does have to live for...idk..Put a baby/child into the picture or something. Depressing endings leave me hanging. I'm just never satisfied after one.
Other then that, it was a beautiful story, and very well writen!