What!? Is that the end!? I loved it but it can't end like that! Loved the dammit doll too!

But what happens? Too cute for an open ending, I need answers!

OMG,you totally made me want more of this story. It's complete? I mean, just like that? Can't you make a second chapter? make this to a two-shot (if there is such a thing). It was such a cliffhanger. I want to know if Jeff would respond in a positive way (you know what I mean). Gosh, the ending left me wanting more. MORE! Pretty please with chocolate syrup and cherry on top...

really really wanted the dammit doll. that idea was epiiic. :)) BUT YOU DIDN'T FILL OUT MORE KATIE JEFF GOODY-NESS! I DON'T WANNA IMAGINE, I WANT YOU TO WRITE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT. hahaahahaah anyway, nice jab at the cliche. :)

hilarious! but the ending could do with some reworking. idk. 'our lips collided' just lacks all sorts of grace. it's short and sweet, but i think you should end with a different line. or maybe just cut out the last three lines, since we'll already know she's kissing him.

There were a few grammatical errors but overall this story was really good. The Dammit Doll he made her was brilliant! I just wish you didn't end it that way. Great story and thanks for posting it.

Where is the rest of this? Blah! I'm dying! *shivers* it's so cold so so cold, write the rest so you can save me :) lol

SEQUEL!

I loved, loved, LOVED the idea about a Dammit doll. And I like the way you managed to not write fluff, and still make the best friends cliche awesome. Not that fluff is bad, its like cheese :D

Great job! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

:D

is it legal for you to just end it like that? DX

hahaha, but it was a very enjoyable read from start to finish. good job! :)

Aww this is so cute! And I love the doll. Some people actually really need that doll haha. And I love how you named it Dammit. So cute!

Love the story!

~*~Ngoc1231~*~

Aw:)

loved the dammit doll! :) Good oneshot!