|Reviews for Anyone Else, But You|
| LyBhing chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Leave everything to the imagination afterward, tease. X:
Well, off to read your other stories.
| renegade01 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
p.s love the dammit doll...
| Jhaynee chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Love how the ending leaves us hanging wondering what happened. Totally enjoyed it.
| Jade Q. Dean chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Haha, nice end :p How teasing XD
| Skyterra chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
That is so cute :)
| eskimoxisses chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
frickin awesome. you know how to make cliffhangers.
thanks for bringing it to fictionpress.
| naningxoxo chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
oh god... you're such a tease. Handin' out such a frustration built up story and leading it towards satisfaction then BAM! the end. Dang! I really wanted to see exactly when things get heated and they realize how perfect they are together. But other than that, wonderful. Truly splendid.
| alwaysautumn chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Haha. That showed him, huh?
But honestly, what the hell? 'She's just a bang' - Yep. I was 'this' *fingers about a millimetre apart* close to hitting him over the head (if that was possible) after he said that. Gahh! Boys...*shakes head*
Stupid remarks like that encourage those poor deranged albeit misguided fools. Gosh.
*ahem* Sorry got a bit carried away there XD
So.. I loved it ;)
The dialogue was believable!
The girl had a . (So, she cry. Her cruch was all ape like with a she-devil, give the girl a break)
So... the critism...Well, you see here.. it was only one itsy bisty thing..
I wanted to read MORE!
GOSH. I want to Know what Katie does. Jeff's reaction, what the hell happens to the *cough* she-devil*cough* I mean racheal. Details woman! I want more details!
P.s Teehehehe the dammit doll was tres cool ;)
| Casablanca Dreams chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
This was cute. Really, really cute. I love the ending-it's open, so we can interpret it any way we want to!
| anitsirK chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Hahahaha...there were a lot of creative stuff embedded in this story. I love the dammit doll and the part when you narrated using the weather report jargon. Anyhow, a bit open-ended, isn't it? But, still, a good one-shot. :) Keep writing.
| melores chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
GAAH! AMAZING! would you consider continuing this one-shot for a couple chapters? Maybe even one? : )
| 2005nostalgia chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
This was so cute!
the ending, I absolutely heart it XD
thanks for a great read. (:
| theslykit chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
i love the dammit doll! you should create a line..lol. cute story.
| annoyance chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Cute. I wish you hadn't left it hanging though!
| Miss Curiosity chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
HA! After reading this, I need to get myself a "Dammit" doll! Pretty cheep for some good "anger venting" stimulation.