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![]() ![]() ![]() Leave everything to the imagination afterward, tease. X: Well, off to read your other stories. -Lyia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tease! p.s love the dammit doll... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love how the ending leaves us hanging wondering what happened. Totally enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, nice end :p How teasing XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is so cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() heck yah! frickin awesome. you know how to make cliffhangers. thanks for bringing it to fictionpress. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh god... you're such a tease. Handin' out such a frustration built up story and leading it towards satisfaction then BAM! the end. Dang! I really wanted to see exactly when things get heated and they realize how perfect they are together. But other than that, wonderful. Truly splendid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha. That showed him, huh? But honestly, what the hell? 'She's just a bang' - Yep. I was 'this' *fingers about a millimetre apart* close to hitting him over the head (if that was possible) after he said that. Gahh! Boys...*shakes head* Stupid remarks like that encourage those poor deranged albeit misguided fools. Gosh. *ahem* Sorry got a bit carried away there XD So.. I loved it ;) The dialogue was believable! The girl had a . (So, she cry. Her cruch was all ape like with a she-devil, give the girl a break) So... the critism...Well, you see here.. it was only one itsy bisty thing.. I wanted to read MORE! GOSH. I want to Know what Katie does. Jeff's reaction, what the hell happens to the *cough* she-devil*cough* I mean racheal. Details woman! I want more details! P.s Teehehehe the dammit doll was tres cool ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cute. Really, really cute. I love the ending-it's open, so we can interpret it any way we want to! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahaha...there were a lot of creative stuff embedded in this story. I love the dammit doll and the part when you narrated using the weather report jargon. Anyhow, a bit open-ended, isn't it? But, still, a good one-shot. :) Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAAH! AMAZING! would you consider continuing this one-shot for a couple chapters? Maybe even one? : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! This was so cute! the ending, I absolutely heart it XD thanks for a great read. (: xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the dammit doll! you should create a line..lol. cute story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. I wish you hadn't left it hanging though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA! After reading this, I need to get myself a "Dammit" doll! Pretty cheep for some good "anger venting" stimulation. |