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![]() ![]() ![]() That was a great story, but i think it would have been better if you wrote what was Jeff's reaction AFTER the kiss. Good job, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loced it so so so much! Especially the DAMMIT doll! XDXD Highlight of the whole story for me! LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, leave it to the reader's imagination! The protagonist in this one-shot was hilarious. well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgg i totally want to know what happends next ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah, I thought you were going to end this at "Best friends. Forever." and I was going to throw a fit. But you didnt end it there :) Great job! Absolutely LOVED the Dammit doll :D -Aria |
![]() ![]() You know...that is really not fair. That ending not fair. at all. ( I realy realy realy wanna know what happens next ( Please write another chapter? D I love your characters ] It'd make a great story D short story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dammit! Dammit! Dammit! I wanted to see his reaction. But cute! And funny! Nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's cliche, of course, but it's well-written and I love how her emotions are portrayed. The ending leaves the reader a bit hanging (which is frustrating and nice at the same time), and this was quite fun to read. (: I'm adding it to my c2, tehe. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an evil, EVIL ending! It works best as a one shot, but oh, geez, do I wish there was more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cute. I can totally relate to Katie. You left me hanging though! I want to see Jeff's reaction to the kiss! But this was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I heart Jeff and Katie's interactions. The knock knock bit makes me happy. Who says you can't write dialogue? D: This obviously proves that you can. Of course, I still want more, even though I know it says complete. XD |