TOO FUNNY. I was expecting him to find her out, but the ending still caught me by surprise :) I hope you have a sequel to this.

Omfg. Bast one-Shot EVER! Sooooooo funny and the ending is.. GaH! So annoying but awesome. Like you get to choose how it ends. Lolz I am giggling and trying desperately to think up a good ending in my head. :D Awesome. Story. bro.

ahahahha amaaaazing! It just made my day D

Grinned the whole way through. The commentary was priceless. Well done!

You successfully managed to captivate me this entire time - something difficult to manage with my fluctuating attention span and seven tabs on Google Chrome.

I also felt quite embarrassed for her throughout the majority of reading this.

I just I can't this was-

May I just say that you also managed to leave me dying from laughter as I read:

"007 status: connecting carbon chains to make swastikas."

So I successfully lived without oxygen for a minute or so.

I love this. So very sweet! Gah, melting from cute sweetness lol. . .

Very nicely written.

LOVED THIS STORY! :)

woooaa :) amazing amazing amazing, love it, love ashton, love all

You reviewed me at some point, and I forgot to reply/return because... well, because I'm an idiot.

We'll just leave it at that.

Holy mother of Stalin, where did all your reviews come from and where do I get some?

This story was epic. LOL. I just... I loved it. Okay?

Faved!

-REB

Oh my god ... . That awkward moment when you're not as discreet as you think . . Oh my god .

NICE!...man that guy is seriously cool lol he didn't even freak out! update?

I absolutely ADORE this! I've read it, like, five times now, and I'm still not tired of it. You're a really good writer. Maybe you can write a sequel?

short sweet and simple indeed.. hahahha

cute fic.. great job

Oh that's so cute! I loved your story!

Hahaha, oh wow, this was really refreshing. Great job.