Reviews for The Day I Stalked Him
TuneOut chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
I loved this story. It's so funny, and witty while being right to the point. I love her spy inner ramblings and the ending, I thought, was a fantastic way to end. I like the fact that you didn't overload us with detail. I don't like it when people are overly sparse but I don't like mountains of detail either.

Great job
Narc chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
This was hilarious. The narrator is funny and easy-to-believe. Although her actions are a little extreme, it's not hard to imagine a girl trying to find fault in her crush so she'll have a good reason not to like him anymore.

I thought the ending was perfect and well-timed. It was a great happy ending when I was starting to get the picture that she would discover he was spoken for and give it up. It leaves a lot in the open, but gives that suggestion that she might get her happily ever after after all.

For the review marathon (there's a link to it in my profile).
Brittany chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Absolutely fantastic! I wish you could continue it!
infundibuliform chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Oh, my God. That is so messed up. LOL When I finished, I got out of my seat, began pacing and went, "That is so messed up." hahaha

That was awesome and really creative! :D Favoriting!
Hear Harmony chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Perfectly cliffy ending. But I guess it's one of those stories that you don't really want to know what happens next, you leave it all for dirty imagination sake. KIDDING.

Humorous in every possible way, kept me snorting unattractively into my pudding.


Jade Q. Dean chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Hahaha XD That was truly amazing and really original XD cracked me up, lol. Especially the bathroom scene, god, he had eczema XD so funny
sherbetsi chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
its so witty and then at the end it lives you hanging with just a hint at suggestion.. i really loved it! XD
ElusiveConquest chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
this was really cute.

maybe you could continue it?

cause i really want to know what he thinks of her stalking him

Liisha2theMoon chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Probably the best one-shot I've ever read. I feel inspired to stalk some poor guy around now, with a composition notebook in hand, refering to myself as 007... This made my day for sure. 8D
CrayonMentality chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
cheimpo17 chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Your story made me laugh. It's the funniest one I've read so far. You are a talented writer. A definite fave.
Sakurelle chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
This was the awesomest ever! Absolutely loved it!
Le Meg chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
This was way too adorable, in the "may these thoughts never leave my head because no one should ever know how truly neurotic I actually am" kind of way. Great friggin' ending. I'm a fan. :]
Tetelestai chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
hahahahaha LOVE IT! I'm very impressed with the stalker-girl's tenacity.. following a boy into the bathroom is something even me, super-stalker-girl-in-real-life, wouldn't do. Genius ending, even though I wish there was a tiny bit more.. enough to see the girl's reaction. Props to Ashton for not freaking out over her following him around all day haha.

lulu chapter 1 . 1/7/2009



you should write a second chapter
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