Reviews for The Day I Stalked Him
Joshikousei chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
i reread this one-shot, and without fail, it again made my day.

so much so that i had to review again, this time signed. :-)
windyday chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Oh. My. Gosh. My heart suddenly stopped and my entire body went sort of .. whoosh.. you know? It was like ANTICIPATION, HORROR, then relief then the girl hormones kicked in and I went all googly eyed. Amazing piece of work.

I finally got an account and was too lazy to write another original review. Story's still fantastic, though. :).
wistful-ambtions chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
haha such an intresting story this is
hubbabubba chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
Wow, that was so cute and hilarious! I have a big smile on my face now, so thank you. Awesome job!
KarrahBear chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
haha! i totally loved it! it was great!
xx chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
haha, omg, brilliant.
Stahlut chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
haha that was absolutley hilarious I loved it. How on earth did you come up with that, it was just really good.
cerulean sea chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
I loved it.

Absolutely loved it. Perfect ending to it too.

LOL. I'm reading this at midnight so I had to silently laugh. It was hard. D:

Great one-shot!
andee lee chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
Oh my God I'm dying!

That was so damn hilarious! My favorite line: "Target caught self-cultivating in school bathroom stall."

OMG I laughed for ten minutes, lol.

That was so much fun to read!

-Andee :-)
gwen chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
ahahahhaah! seriously this story needs to be continued. sequel please! ;))
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
WHE! Great story!

Lils03 chapter 1 . 10/20/2008

Pure brilliance!

Ah! I love it!

I am also ashamed to admit that there is a particular guy I see every tuesday that I have been accused of stalking... which is why i LOVE this story! And I mean this in a completely non-creepy way (to the highest degree). Ahh! I just love this story! I laughed so hard I cried / am crying!
cutepanda chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Hahaha! I laughed throughout the story! Loved the last part "TURN AROUND"! Absolutely hilarious! I reckon you have done a GREAT and FANTASTIC job, you deserve a pat on the back!

No wonder you have so many reviews. One of the best One-shots ever read.
squiggle-line chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
This is great! Laugh-out-loud funny, strong voice, well-paced plot. The part about the narrator skipping one class and going to all of Ashton's instead is a little confusing: "Thanks to the two morning spares and an early dismissal, it was only necessary to skip one class today. But it also meant that it was necessary to endure all of Ashton’s favorite classes: AP Physics, Organic Chemistry, and Honors Differential Calculus." Is there any way to make this more clear? Maybe it's because I'm not familiar with the "spares" idea.

The ending definitely works. I'm glad Ashton's not creeped out by the narrator's stalking :)

Very nice.
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
mission: successful after all.

nice story.
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