|Reviews for The Day I Stalked Him|
| vivalavida chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Your story was so adorable. I'm not going to lie, it was a little creepy at times, but then again it was absolutely HILARIOUS! Very good job! I liked it a lot!
| HiddenFact chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
This little piece is a shining, exemplary ray of contemporary romantic writing. I must say, I was floored. The style of writing and the concept were unique, which is very, very important. The idea of your narrator constantly jotting notes into a journal is fantastic, very well executed.
What really got me, though, was the unique approach to the whole teenaged-romance idea. All teenaged-romantic stories are cliched - every single last one, including yours - and yet, you somehow still managed to suppress that last hurrah until the very end. I'm not saying that yours is the finest example of the teenaged-romantic cliche I've ever seen; what I'm saying is that you've taken the teenaged-romantic cliche and turned it on it's head. You've taken the cliche and transformed it into something completely different, something spectacular.
Only thing I can recommend doing is cleaning up the grammar a little bit, keep it a little more consistent, and that's it. Excellent job.