|Reviews for and its you and me and the ticking of our lives|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
i love the vivid images in the first stanza, especially the part with killing dreams and trashing them. that really spoke to me. wonderful work.
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
;) yer commas r weird
*crazy, if you will
i was thinking of stopping my review there, but i'll continue for the sake of uhm
eww argh actually just because i like the poem
(except the word kill :p)
anyway i think you really wrote this, style-wise, amazingly well.
all the linebreaks are good, and the sentence-ish structure totally makes the piece.