Reviews for and its you and me and the ticking of our lives |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i love the vivid images in the first stanza, especially the part with killing dreams and trashing them. that really spoke to me. wonderful work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;) yer commas r weird ~*crazy, if you will ha i was thinking of stopping my review there, but i'll continue for the sake of uhm eww argh actually just because i like the poem (except the word kill :p) anyway i think you really wrote this, style-wise, amazingly well. all the linebreaks are good, and the sentence-ish structure totally makes the piece. :] |