Reviews for Free Fall
otakuami111 chapter 1 . 11/18/2016
Wow. This was so heart breaking. :'-(
somersaultkick chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
I wonder what's holding them back. I hope they can see each other again. I hope her prayer reaches God. The story is vague but I like it that way. I would cry like your others like The Knight and his Princess, Just to see her smile, Keep it a secret, but I guess curiousity made me hold back.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
Beautiful
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
It had a deeper meaning to it,twas vague but deep
Krisanita chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
Wow,twas rili touching,it was vague bt intruiging,so close yet far,the choice of words were poetic and still we knw those words have deeper meaning
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Gawd. Give me anything. Something! To wrap my head to what just happened. It's so vague but so beautiful. Are they gay? Or is the boy gonna die? Incest? Anything! :)) love it tho.
bookwurm247 chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
I'm a little confused but I love it anyway.
displacedfemale chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Some one shots I read, review and then carry on as normal, content with having read just that short snippet of the characters rather than an indepth past others I get to the end, leave a review and spend days constantly wondering why something has happened or what has lead to the events of the one-shot... I fear this could be one of the latter.

There are so many questions! I'm almost hoping that once I finish this review and go check out your profile I'll see that this is a one shot spin off from a longer piece and some if not all of my questions will be answered.

What's happened that's making everyone look at the couple like they are?
Why is the guy leaving?
Why didn't they work out?
What happened from which they both had to recover?

Whilst I'm somewhat frustrated by the questions I'm left with I'm also quite surprised by how many scenarios my mind has come up with to answer these questions. I'm also firmly of the belief that a good piece of writing will stick in your mind for a while and this will surely do that!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Your one shots are really good!
Shooting Star chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
This is as amazing story! I don't if i'm right but im going to guess that the speaker is also a guy? and they were best friends that turned into love for each other but they couldn't be accepted in their school? If so then this is heartbreaking because evennow when most people fully accept gay rights, marriage etc people are still cruel and spiteful and i think this story shows the truth of people in that situation, instead of fighting back they just let themselves be torn apart xx
lydsyko chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Why can't they be together?
This is really a powerful piece you have written here.
crystalhate chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
My heart just shattered. Confused? Yeah.
Simplegift96 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I.. I don't have any words for this.. It's vague yet at the same time, so clear.. I mean, we know exactly what's going on, but then we don't at the same time.. How is that even possible?
Tetsone fuu chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
cries epically
LillieS chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Okay, the story was confusing. I reread it, and found no explanation whatsover as to what was going on. Yet, for some reason you understood it, well I did anyway. This is one of those stories where you understood because of the feeling and the tiny hints here and there. It's like someone talking to you in a foreign language or in broken English. The whole situation is confusing but you guys can sort of communicate through feelings and gestures, if that makes sense. The story was nonetheless good and worthwhile reading.
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