Reviews for Free Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 'aw..so sad and a little bit confusing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused. && Sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You caused my heart to ache and soar through the sky and sweep back down to the cruel and unsettling reality. Reality in a story is the best for the aching heart. Thank you. XOXO |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's a wonder I've never reviewed this story, because it's not my first time reading it. And the last lines have stuck with me like no other. It's really heartbreaking. And I've read some reviewes for this - somebody mentioned this possibly being an insight to Baby, I'm not finished. I surely hope that's not it because I'll be crying for weeks because of it. And I'm not even an emotional person. On the other hand, this mentiones that "this time", he's leaving for good, and I don't remember that happening in BINF. Plus that "i dont want to sound mean but wat the hell just happened" review is one of the best things I've read recently. Hilarious. :) Anyway, I really think you've done a great job with this. It's a perfect snapshot of a turningpoint in a life. More bitter than sweet, but ultimately heartbreaking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another of your stories that I love. It shows that love is bittersweet, love has it time when it's meant to happen and when it's not. Please I hope this an insight to how BINF ends it will have me in tears. |
![]() ![]() This is really good, but I really wish you would expand on it. You have a good introduction going and now you could start from the beginning and start explaining the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was truly amazing(: Worth the read. The title works for this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im bawling again.. your stories effect me like no other... this was heartbreakingly good |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so beautiful! And sad [ Bit confusing though XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw... damn. ive been doing that a lot. aww-ing at cutethings. anyway, love the story:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow the way you wrote that was almost poetic But I'm going to agree with the others is this like forbidden love step siblings or something. It was incredibly good though and I felt her heartache Your an amazing writer |
![]() ![]() ![]() wt just happened? is this incest or smthg? the story is wonderful and all, but i sort of not get it. waait,lol is she an angel? 'cause she's praying and all. |
![]() ![]() can i say owned? haha, kidding. it was beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont want to sound mean but wat the hell just happened |