Reviews for Free Fall
Warrior-Princess06 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
'aw..so sad and a little bit confusing.
DofD chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I'm confused. && Sad.
DorkExpress chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
You caused my heart to ache and soar through the sky and sweep back down to the cruel and unsettling reality.

Reality in a story is the best for the aching heart. Thank you.

XOXO
bridgettblah chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Aw
Frozen.by.Sloth chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
It's a wonder I've never reviewed this story, because it's not my first time reading it.

And the last lines have stuck with me like no other.

It's really heartbreaking.

And I've read some reviewes for this - somebody mentioned this possibly being an insight to Baby, I'm not finished. I surely hope that's not it because I'll be crying for weeks because of it. And I'm not even an emotional person. On the other hand, this mentiones that "this time", he's leaving for good, and I don't remember that happening in BINF.

Plus that "i dont want to sound mean but wat the hell just happened" review is one of the best things I've read recently. Hilarious. :)

Anyway, I really think you've done a great job with this. It's a perfect snapshot of a turningpoint in a life. More bitter than sweet, but ultimately heartbreaking.
silviaxvivalavida chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Another of your stories that I love. It shows that love is bittersweet, love has it time when it's meant to happen and when it's not.

Please I hope this an insight to how BINF ends it will have me in tears.
kat chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
This is really good, but I really wish you would expand on it. You have a good introduction going and now you could start from the beginning and start explaining the story.
x Farii chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
This was truly amazing(:

Worth the read.

The title works for this story.
oxBlueEyes15xo chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
im bawling again.. your stories effect me like no other... this was heartbreakingly good
SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
That was so beautiful! And sad [

Bit confusing though XD
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
aw... damn. ive been doing that a lot. aww-ing at cutethings. anyway, love the story:D
samora chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Wow the way you wrote that was almost poetic

But I'm going to agree with the others is this like

forbidden love step siblings or something.

It was incredibly good though and I felt her heartache

Your an amazing writer
mistariapotter chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
wt just happened? is this incest or smthg? the story is wonderful and all, but i sort of not get it. waait,lol is she an angel? 'cause she's praying and all.
cynthian chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
can i say owned?

haha, kidding.

it was beautiful.
Aaerie chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
i dont want to sound mean but wat the hell just happened
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