Awe! That was an amazingly good piece of slightly depressing literature. And I mean that in a totally and completely good way. It's what every one fears to do, end a relationship or say goodbye. However, I'm kind of curious as to why there's so much hate/revulsion toward them. But it was good! So compliments to you!

-Mariakay

Beautiful.

Maybe you should continue it! :)

aww that was sweet

Oh wow...that was really well written. The message was awesome, and the way it was conveyed really was beautiful. Great piece. :)

The thing that gets me, well there's several.

But it's the fact that there getting together was frowned upon?

But it also says that they were best friends.

That never saw anyone else in the world.

Then why did it matter so much?

And why did he have to leave?

But I did like it.

I would make a smiley face, but they kinda look stupid on here. So envision a smiley face.

wow. that was very sad. i kind of didnt understand why and so on but it was still very well done. good job!

take care.

this is amazing and heartbreaking and i just love it! brilliance

Breathtaking.

very beautiful and i can relate.

good story!

-MiScHiEvOuS sMiLeS

It's very mysterious. The reader doesn't quite know what's going on, or rather, what happened. But we feel the emotions of the characters, and sometimes, that's all it takes.

Another excellent oneshot. :P Adding it to our c2, heh. (:

Wow. I like it. It's very vague, it could be anything. Bleachers, disapproval, going away. Teacher student?

I felt so bad for her.

:(

Why couldn't they be together?

The summary was perfect, I loved it.

:)

But I do think the ending of the first paragraph needs some work. Maybe rewording or something? I don't know. But maybe it should be like that.

Her whole world's been ripped from under her and whatnot.

But everything else is great.

That was really good, well written & whatnot. Though the whole time I was trying to figure out WHY they couldn't be together. Like one of them was actually dying from something or whatever. I dunno. All the same, excellently written, as always.

First Time Read Through: sad. confused

Second Time: confused. indifference.

Third Time: just plain confused.

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