Reviews for Zach and Ana |
---|
![]() ![]() I give up lol bye |
![]() ![]() Good. |
![]() ![]() I hate Kyle. And this better not be like the Vow where she never regains her memory. |
![]() ![]() too predictable. I knew it would happen from the start. |
![]() ![]() If this is one of those amnesia stories I'll fucking kill you |
![]() ![]() Just done with the whole chapters. Took 3-4 days to complete the whole story but it was worth it. The story of Zach n Ana is sweet, innocent n pure. The way they understand each other, leaving no room for any kind of misunderstanding n their trust in one another sustained their relationship n acted as a protective shield warding off all the evil eyes. Everything is so perfect. Love the story n the characters. All credit goes to #J-Time... ️️️ |
![]() ![]() This storry is very well written and I love it. I feel bad for all of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing. I love it (: You made Ana extremely relatable. Even though Zach seemed a little pushy at first, they just...fit together. great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Your story has been added over to ADoR under the Girl and Best Friend category :) Here's your review: Zach and Ana is one of those incredibly well written stories. There was a brilliant variety of emotions and the plot was filled with twists and turns. Fortunately enough, it didn't get too unrealistic, or heavy to read, thanks to the good balance of humor and seriousness. The story is about Zach and Ana's friendship and eventual romance. A boy-girl friendship can be sweet, but as the teen years come closer, drama will, of course, star to ensue. Zach was the typical oblivious guy but he soon became a sweet, caring boyfriend. Ana could sometimes be a little forgettable, but she had many good moments and soon became a beloved character. The story is very, very long (252, 850 words) but I think that worked for Zach and Anna. There was an extensive plot to cover and many events taking place - it didn't drag on excessively. Overall, this is one best friend cliché you do not want to miss out on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story. |
![]() ![]() This is my favorite on Fictionpress. I have read it three times before and this is my fourth. I just love the story. It is unique in so many ways. :) |
![]() ![]() I loved this story sooooo much, can you do like a one-shot epilogue kinda? (: |
![]() ![]() The end of this chapter made me smile all too much. I think I may just read it again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved the story but it defiantly needs an epilog. the ending was so abrupt I want to know what happens in college. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEY! |