Reviews for Between
Luna's Child chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Wow, great poem!
Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Well, I've got this idea that this poem is about the differences and distances between two people in a relationship. Am I right on that? Anyway, good poem here. It really reflects the moods of distance between two people. Good job here. And yeah, thanks for your review on Seal of Valor. Hope to see more of your reviews soon! Bye! :)

P.S: When are you gonna update The Witch Princess? I'm waiting for it...
Shdwphoenix chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
I adore how this poem's structure plays with each of the four cardinal directions, evoking strong natural imagery. 'And yet', the poem laments: for all of nature's seemingly absolute power to mold the landscape, it can't do a thing to change whatever has caused this couple to drift apart. The poem illustrates this kind of hopeless feeling very well.

I especially liked the lines about the rain softening the tallest trees. This is a touching piece.

- Shdwphoenix