|Reviews for Swollen...|
| La Contessa de Machina chapter 1 . 6/17/2001
hey, this was written in the same style as billy's machina chapters, huh? there's a jack off jill song called swollen, too. you write so pretty, snooz. i like this one. do more.
| MidnightBlaze chapter 1 . 4/16/2001
I enjoyed this. My favorite line, though all are good, was "Where, usually, I am staying sane/I am running towards crazy, all the way". This really hit me, cuz I totally know what you are saying. Very deep. And don't kid yourself, you are good. _ But, one thing for a little constructive critisism, I don't like the layout of the poem. It's kinda confusing. But, other than that, it's wonderful.