|Reviews for Just to make sure, because I'm not so sure-|
| az2328 chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
ohh!1 i so like this!
it's so good!
i'll come back b4 i start gushing!:O
(p/s: that's a mouth agape - hey! if you can find a better one i'm open to suggestions!)
| Adelaide La Blanche-Dupont chapter 1 . 4/15/2001
Keep that patient grace going, Suzanne Estelle! That last verse is SO poignant and you really have the song/poem together by that stage. "Oh heavy eyes and heavy eyes plus the full weight of the mind" that would be a state which many readers are familiar with. Your use of language is excellent, and it really provokes the emotions that you want to provoke, if it is a little verbose. The violence towards herself the narrator expresses is very stylised but that's a good thing. And keep on praying for relief. Your use of rhetorical questions in the second and third lines are very effective. They're questions I've often asked myself at one time or another.