... I knew both of them would die.

That's your specialty, Muse. Killing people. (Not that it's a necessarily bad thing.)

You NEED to advertise more, Muse. Seriously.

This fic was cool to read, but it needs something other than cheem vocab to stand out.

You seriously need more attention.

And, I hereby conclude I actually understand where this story's going!

Aha! I knew that vomit was morning sickness!

Will this story really be based on Giselle?

I also have to say, I am now starting to find your story interesting. Update, yo.

And you can also reply to me since I have an account.

Okay, this chapter, wasn't as cheem as I thought it would be.

But, I can't say anything constructive, as I don't write these sort of stories.

Hence, you need more love and reviews. So here's a review!

One word: Cheem.

I can't give any constructive review, because I am your lesser individual. But this is definitely rated M.

Never mind. Tell me when you update.