|Reviews for Turbulence|
| Julietish chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
A Drop of Romeo reviewed your story, so here's the review:
I've been fortunate enough to travel rather frequently and Turbulence is the fantasy I have every time that I'm bored in an airport. The story takes place entirely on a plane from Denver to Los Angeles. The protagonist is an unnamed speaker who has to be the clumsiest, most anxious person to ever exist. However, I found the predicaments resulting from how accident prone she is to be very endearing. I laughed each time she did something to dig herself an even deeper hole. The unnamed boy seated next to her on the plane is the unfortunate bearer of all of her mistakes and a huge source of comic relief.
There isn't much dialogue in this story, which I sometimes find daunting, but sunshinedoll does an impeccable job of establishing character connections through actions. The story is easy to relate to as sunshinedoll creates a narrative that is very human. Everyone has made a mistake before and become so frazzled by it that chaos erupts around them. The humor that is the end result of the speaker's tumultuous day makes the story, in my opinion. I still have a smile on my face. If you're interested in a cute, funny, one shot before school or work, give turbulence a try. May we all be so lucky the next time we're on a plane.
| Jess chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Haha,this story is so cute. I love the last two words!
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Really funny and cute! I really enjoyed reading this!
| APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Aw, I love it :D
| shortwinters219 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
| not atlas chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
| A-new-colour chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
I love how they don't say much yet they end up liking each other :)
| MEG0205 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Lol. Loved it! Very funny!
| An chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Awww so cute! I really enjoyed reading this :)
| Nobody chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Oh I love this story! It made me very happy. Keep up the excellent work!
| Kyllex chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
ah! this was insanely cute. i loved it. i just love how he laughs every time she embarasses herself. and the ending was cute, so don't worry about it. (: good job!
| anitsirK chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I thought it was good. :) Though I don't get why they never talked that much during the entire plane ride. That seemed kinda unusual. :) Even a simple exchange of names of something could have been more realistic. :D
| the rational hedgehog chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
The cute tactic worked-I'M FEELIN' THE CUTE! I like how no one had a name (except for Julia, but she's not important D) and how obnoxious that boy is. XD
Thanks for writing~
| LarunaBelle chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Oh... For a while I thought he was a mute XD
Sweet little story.
| ponponcake chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
AW dammit the ending is just...AW *gooey look* loved this oneshot! :D