Reviews for Turbulence
Green.and.Gray chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
AHH! ITS SO CUTE! Great job, I love it!
Trish chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
That was super adorable. XD Love it
funky-gg chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
loved it so cute
sparklesparkle chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
This is very cute, and I love it.

It's a little bit quirky and the characters are interesting and pull you in.

Not to mention the ending is incredibly sweet (:
NotABanana chapter 1 . 8/11/2008


Sakurelle chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Aw, that was really cute!
Papaya chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
You know I love it. ;) Now it's your turn! Review mine! TAG YOUR IT!
russlove chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
aw! too cute for words :] i love it.

Cody Reyes chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Aw, that was neat. I really liked how you develop your characters, it makes them realistic.

Overall, it was a pretty cute story. :D
bee bee chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
cute cute cute.

made me smile more than anything else on fictionpress has for awhile.

very realistc.

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Catcher in the Rye chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
I really loved this! Even with all the cltuzyness, it's pretty much a perfect plane fantasy )

Your two characters were vervy cute and I like them alot!

You're an awesome writer, keep it up!
christine chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
aw jules, that was so cute!

i loved the ending and the whole fright of airplanes thing.

very good job! )
ValSilph chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
ROFL! This is hilarious, and oh so cute! I love it :D
Cierra chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Aw, this was cue ]
RYTEREWQ chapter 1 . 8/11/2008


Seriously- fluff overload.

I found it a bit hard to relate, cause I love airplanes, personally. Haha.

Aww. MC's klutzyness is so adorable.

And I loved the stick figures.

And strangely enough, I also liked Julia.

Good job, I loved it. (:
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