Reviews for Turbulence
Joy V joy2008 chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
"“Oh my God, I’m so sorry!” I wave my hands around, flustered. This waving doesn’t help the situation at all but it somehow makes me feel better. “I am so, so sorry!”"

"My eyes trail down to the crudely drawn picture in the corner of the white page. A scratched in stick figure is smashed underneath a suitcase—I’m guessing it’s me because it’s a girl; you can only tell by the long hair. And next to the squished, screaming figure is a boy with curly hair—his stupid stick figure face has a big mouth and as if the hint isn’t enough, there’s a speech bubble next to him with a big “HA HA!” inside."

Those made me laugh. It was great! And the ending was kinda cute. Haha You're an awesome writer.
Bee chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
AMAZING! I LOVED this! So cute and sweet and perfect. :]
Hi There chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
that was TOO cute!

i love it :)

you're a fantastic writer
Spurlunk chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
kiss was random. O_o
Liv Ramatta chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Very cute! For such a short story, I'm impressed! I don't really have anything bad (or CONSTRUCTIVE) or whatever to say about it, so all I can leave are my compliments and a smiley- :D


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