Aw it was so cute ]

omg i really like this story...its so cute XD anywho, yeah so, er yeah...and yeah...us brits do make the bestest films XD...i *hearts* dexter...hes awesome...and o like lurve in the air, or at least some nice teenage romance... xox RRGF

Oh this is cute, definately going to be following this story

Keep up the good work

I dunno. I really love this story because the narration sounds like me. xD God times...moar pl0x? 8D

Dexter is cool w

Haha, This story is really good.

You should update!

Haha, I like the long chapters aand stuff.

And like everything.

:)

I really liked this chapter because it IS random. Sometimes I need random. Although I can't wait to see where you take the plot. :) I love the character so far.

So far I'm in love with this story. Mattie reminds me so much of myself, it's eerie. Myself and my friends really. So. Keep it up! _

Me likey! Me want mnore! Me needs to pee! ... ok ... bye! :D

Oh, what a good start. You jumped right into the action and did a good job of showing the main character and Harrison's personalities. My only nitpick is that you repeate Harrison's name way too much.

Aside from that, it's pretty good.

- Koki