Reviews for Stairway to Heaven
Yuyuto chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
I dunno if this is suppose to be a short story or not, but it definitely feels "unfinished," in my opinion. Your description is pretty good and overall, the story didn't bore me, which I'm so thankful for hehe. Not saying that everything you write is boring, but alot of fics on here are just downright boring, but you were able to hold me as a reader. Good work, although I'd like you to go a bit deeper into this; I would much like to see the story continue, or at least explain what happened. Something like a flashback wouldn't be a terrible idea.

Hope to see more!

-Ray