Reviews for Scratched Wrist Consumerist
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
I cannot begin to describe how much I LOVE this piece.

The descriptions and images are so vivid. Brilliantly written.
softersin chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
This is epic and ironic.

It's nice to have a good read once in a while.

Thank you.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
those last three lines are interesting

and image that i had not thought about too much

it's interesting, i am just unsure of some of the images

but it is very rich with description
heart'sespionage chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
you weaved together sacrilege, sex, consumerism, and religion effortlessly...and it left a smile on my face
593976 chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Wow, very powerful. I love the imagery and the rhythm, especially "cons/equences." I enjoyed it.
Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Wow. This is powerful, a pleasant wake-up bitch-slap in the face.

It's entrancing the way you combine the wealthy affair with religion, and kind of confusing, but in a nice way.

My favorite lines are the "i want" ones, the ones pertaining to the author, because they seem so hopeful and bright in contrast to the degrading lines about "consumers" and "coat-hanger wives" ...

Anyway, I like it a lot.

Katie