|Reviews for Applesauce!|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH ESPECIALLY THE WAY YOU USED THE SLANG
ITS JUST THE BEES KNEES
| blurrylights chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
This story was really funny...I loved it! The terms and stuff was crazy funny, and congrats on getting all the points! It was carefree and light, so kudos to you on that! :)
| LittleIllusionist chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I absolutely adore the 20's, so I was instantly hooked when I saw this. I like how it's very light and fun. The use of all the slang (even if it was an assignment) was rather cute, and I could recognize a good amount of them.
| S. M. Saves chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
The dialogue was excellent. Very believable. The only critique I have is that it could have had more descriptions. I realize this takes place in the south (hence "east of the Mississippi") but are the characters black or white? Middle class or struggling to survive? Etc.
Other than that, I liked the storyline.