Reviews for Gauntlet Slap
Tawny Owl chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
This made me laugh. You managed to conjure up some fantastic images even though it was just dialogue.
GRAYTEXT chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I liked the form here, a one-sided dialogue, though sometimes it felt a little forced. Well done, though. I enjoyed it.
Paradox-revealed chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I was cracking up while I was reading this.

My only thing though was that it was hard to understand at first. Other than that, it was good.
Edgren Vis chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Cute.

Maybe need to change the formatting of it a little to make it a bit easier, but it is still good. Maybe use speech marks?