Wow... Just wow. This is the most unique and original story that I have read in such a long time. I enjoyed it so much, I read it in one sitting,even though I should have been working p.

I love how you built the characters and developed their relationship. Calleighs character development is fascinating to read.

Please, please, please finish the story! You have amazing talent! xx

I really like this one. It's not your typical vampire story, and I love the nitty gritty roughness of it.

From the first few paragraphs, I got a sense of who Calleigh was as a character and that's something that most writers can really achieve within the first chapter.

I'll definitely keep my eye on this one,

~nicola

i really like it, i know this is bad but i kinda want her to go back alittle roughed up just so he knows she can handle herself you know?

anyway keep writing its really good

very nice

I love how everyone underestimates her... I hope she proves them all wrong. :D

This story is amazing and your a great writer! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

YAY. YOU FINALLY WROTE MORE! :)

I loved this. I need to know more!

Hope you update more SOON!

You're a great writer!

wowa! that chapter was enthralling! I could feel her pain and anger, and feel his voice nearly melt her down. I can't wait long for the next chapter! :D x

I suppose this will be for ransom, eh? Keep Aéden's girl until he gets his back. Haha, this will be interesting.

:D

Are you ever going to post more of this beautiful story? D:

I'm really lovin this story, can't wait to read the rest.

yay! you updated! i'm so happy! you just made my day :)

anyway, can't wait to see what happens nxt!

OMG IF AEDEN SOLD HER I'M GOING TO BE SO MAD!

YOU NEED TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

Gah! I need to know what's going on!

wow! This chapter is amazing! He kidnapped her! I can't wait for more!

Ah, this was very good! I love the whole Eden/Calliegh friendship thing going on! Girls gotta stick together! :D

Glad you updated! Cannot wait for more! :D