Reviews for this is life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "You know, I used to have this dream..." I like that line. It's catchy, allows the reader to consider their own thoughts, and captures your attention. "And you can't reach me." I loved the strong feeling of finality in this line. "Sadness has shades..." Beautiful :) "But, misery lives in us like a faithful shadow." Amazing final line! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending bit was somewhat sad, but I liked it. It had a relaxed, matter-of-fact feel to it. Nice work. - Koki |