|Reviews for this is life|
| Isca chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
"You know, I used to have this dream..." I like that line. It's catchy, allows the reader to consider their own thoughts, and captures your attention.
"And you can't reach me." I loved the strong feeling of finality in this line.
"Sadness has shades..." Beautiful :)
"But, misery lives in us like a faithful shadow." Amazing final line!
| Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
The ending bit was somewhat sad, but I liked it. It had a relaxed, matter-of-fact feel to it. Nice work.