| Reviews for Untouchable |
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   DayDreamer457 chapter 8 . 8/19/2010 You should do Zayden's P.O.V! It's interesting to see how different he is on the inside rather than the jerk he sometimes acts like on the outside. |
| sarcasm is my middle name chapter 11 . 1/28/2010 Great! I love it, and the names! (Zayden, Camelyn, Aeron, etc) |
| this is me exposed chapter 11 . 5/26/2009 I'm way to tired to log in Anyway, great chapter. And the ending was good. FYI Update soon X |
| oreofudge'D chapter 11 . 5/26/2009 Woot~ You used I never! ] Update! |
| swords dragons and diet coke chapter 11 . 5/25/2009 lol I |
| righthere431 chapter 11 . 5/25/2009 Ahaha cute chapter. |
| AsYouWish chapter 11 . 5/25/2009 Come on, nothing happened in this chapter! And I know how Cam personally feels about her "boyfriend," but won't her friends think she is behaving strangely to someone who's supposed to be her boyfriend? Just a thought. I like this story, please update soon! |
| xspringdaizyx chapter 11 . 5/25/2009 more more more more! |
| Rynx-too-genki chapter 11 . 5/24/2009 OMG! AWESOME Chapter! (Even more awesome game! I am so gonna use it at my B-dayz partie! XDD!) Hahha! They're soo mean to Zayden and Cam! XDD! Can't wait 4 their date!~ XDD! Update soon! |
| LaMeO1 chapter 11 . 5/24/2009 good chapter! update soon! |
| flippin chapter 10 . 5/15/2009 actually scratch that about hide n seek and i think a road trip wud be more interesting. they cud go to Las Vegas for game nite. btw where to they live. california sounds like a nice place for them to live in. |
| flippin chapter 10 . 5/15/2009 i really really lik ur storu. please update soon and i think u shud right zaydens pov because i wud like to know his side of the story too. and for game night i think u shud have the classic hide n seek but they hide around the neighborhood. and r u really gonna make cam go to germany? i hope you dont i actually dont want her to go. |
| oreofudge'D chapter 10 . 5/8/2009 Wow. She opened up. Anyway, I suggest you let them play 'I never'. Hehe. [[: Update soon! |
| Hoodfabulous chapter 2 . 5/8/2009 Get you butt over here and give us a hug.” oh it's your not you. |
| Flaming Skys chapter 10 . 5/8/2009 Yay for updates! This is an awesome chapter MYbe they should play typical truth or dare, but make the dares really tough to comeplete. And the truths really personal? Update asap I'll be waiting! X |