Reviews for Untouchable
DayDreamer457 chapter 8 . 8/19/2010
You should do Zayden's P.O.V! It's interesting to see how different he is on the inside rather than the jerk he sometimes acts like on the outside.
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 11 . 1/28/2010
Great! I love it, and the names! (Zayden, Camelyn, Aeron, etc)
this is me exposed chapter 11 . 5/26/2009
I'm way to tired to log in

Anyway, great chapter. And the ending was good. FYI

Update soon

oreofudge'D chapter 11 . 5/26/2009
Woot~ You used I never! ] Update!
swords dragons and diet coke chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
lol I
righthere431 chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Ahaha cute chapter.
AsYouWish chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Come on, nothing happened in this chapter! And I know how Cam personally feels about her "boyfriend," but won't her friends think she is behaving strangely to someone who's supposed to be her boyfriend? Just a thought. I like this story, please update soon!
xspringdaizyx chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
more more more more!
Rynx-too-genki chapter 11 . 5/24/2009
OMG! AWESOME Chapter! (Even more awesome game! I am so gonna use it at my B-dayz partie! XDD!) Hahha! They're soo mean to Zayden and Cam! XDD! Can't wait 4 their date!~ XDD!

Update soon!
LaMeO1 chapter 11 . 5/24/2009
good chapter!

update soon!
flippin chapter 10 . 5/15/2009
actually scratch that about hide n seek and i think a road trip wud be more interesting. they cud go to Las Vegas for game nite. btw where to they live. california sounds like a nice place for them to live in.
flippin chapter 10 . 5/15/2009
i really really lik ur storu. please update soon and i think u shud right zaydens pov because i wud like to know his side of the story too. and for game night i think u shud have the classic hide n seek but they hide around the neighborhood. and r u really gonna make cam go to germany? i hope you dont i actually dont want her to go.
oreofudge'D chapter 10 . 5/8/2009
Wow. She opened up. Anyway, I suggest you let them play 'I never'. Hehe. [[: Update soon!
Hoodfabulous chapter 2 . 5/8/2009
Get you butt over here and give us a hug.”

oh it's your not you.
Flaming Skys chapter 10 . 5/8/2009
Yay for updates!

This is an awesome chapter

MYbe they should play typical truth or dare, but make the dares really tough to comeplete. And the truths really personal?

Update asap

I'll be waiting!

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