Reviews for Untouchable
oreofudge'D chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
I like the start. :) Gonna read the next chapters!
Amaz.Awes.Vert.Chall.Nerd chapter 8 . 3/8/2009
I love this story so far! Its very addicting!
Flaming Skys chapter 8 . 3/1/2009

this was awesome

i really hope you update soon

05-16-93-ashley-gamer-12-03-10 chapter 7 . 2/11/2009
love it
renabear chapter 8 . 2/4/2009
I liked this chapter alot. How did katelyn and her aunt get home though? good job! Can't wait for the next one.
goanywhere chapter 8 . 1/31/2009
really good stuff.

Read all you have.

Sorry bout not reviewing until now.

Update soon.
Kyrina chapter 8 . 1/31/2009
i like this story so please continue and please update soon!
Jevanminx chapter 8 . 1/31/2009
Hehehehehe, going to her workplace just a brilliant scene.

AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 8 . 1/30/2009
finally! an update! This chapter was funny...with the whole Mililano scene and such! It made me laugh a lot )..and Zayden seems a tad smitten over Cam ahemm }. Anyhow please update soon!

-kay gee
05-16-93-ashley-gamer-12-03-10 chapter 8 . 1/30/2009
I must say I adore your story, please write some more
truth17 chapter 8 . 1/30/2009
Aw Zayden is really sweet when he wants to be!
renabear chapter 7 . 1/12/2009
I thought the title was fine. I think travis is just going to happen to be gay "gasp"...that should be nice for Aeron though. I kind of don't want her to go on the trip to germany. Who's going to take care of Katelyn if she does? Great chapter though. Can't wait till the next one!
Jevanminx chapter 7 . 1/8/2009
Aw, is Travis going to be a love for Aeron, I hope so. Hehehe, Zayden doesn't get any girls.

Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 7 . 1/7/2009
cant wait for more!
RoxyReaderXOX chapter 7 . 1/7/2009
New reader here! And I happen to loove your story!:D


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