|Reviews for Sunday Morning|
| Music.Sets.Me.Free chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
This is a great start to a story! I was hooked immediately and the characters seem fun and down to earth! I love the details and emotions that you included! It's very professional and I can't wait to read more!
review mine? s/3037894/1/The-Ballad-of-Mona-Lisa
| BeeAlive chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This is really adorable. It makes me think of something that I used to feel. I can't wait to see what happens next, really well done (:
| xxcubanangelxx chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
I like this, it is amazing to say the least... are you planning on actualloy doing a second chapter? Um... because you haven't updated in a year I think...
Well, it is still really good, hope you do decide to write more... or maybe go back and edit it to be a one-shot?
Whatever you decide, I bet it will be great!
| Puyuria chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
That was amazing! I can't wait for the second chapter! Speaking of the second chapter... you have more than 5 reviews, so where is it? Hm? Anyway that was really good and I hope you write more soon.
| Submarine Symphonika chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Wow, such lovely imagery. You've got my full attention. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Da Vinci at Work chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I've got to say, your writing is phenomenal. I love it. It's so heartfelt, and just the little pieces, little snippets manage to capture that feeling. It's beautiful.
| Mouse Mitterand chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Nice story, and I liked the interactions of the kids, but I was COMPLETELY thrown off by the several changes in narration. I went back and read a few parts several times, thinking maybe it was a mistake or if I had misread it, but still couldn't figure out why you changed from first to third to first person again.
Maybe get someone to edit it for you next time?
| azy07y chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Oh wow, this is good I can tell. And not just the story! Your words, they're so.. Lovely! They flow perfectly, you know the exact ones to use, wonderful!... IF I review twice will you post chapter two?
| Keena Clipp Katfish VII chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
The description and everything was great just watch what perspective you use because you switched from third to first and back again a lot. Overall it was cute. :)
| R.D.Sky chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Aww. I loved the part when they were eight. Please update soon! It's going into my alerts! Great job, you have a beautiful style. Just watch you don't kep switching from him to me. I saw that a few times. Other than that, bravo! Keep it up!
| Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
Ah, so good! I'm super anxious to read more. I hope you get four more reviews quickly, so that you'll post the next chapter sooner.
I'm putting it on my alerts, just so that I don't miss it.