Reviews for Hugs and Kisses
vid-gamer-of-Hyrule chapter 1 . 2/25/2021
God, I actually cried. Well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2020
It's been a long time since something made me feel this much.
jyottoor chapter 1 . 8/19/2020
very cute
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2020
i really got scared for a second but overall this was soooo good
danica.dejuan chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
Amazing story
Shailaputri chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
Wow..She did great...I love happy endings..This is quite good as both of them tries their best.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
I'm crying. Wah. My feeeeeeels.

I do have a little complaint though.

When I was reading this story through a second time, I realised that you jumped tenses a few times.

Second last section: "She's been hurting [past] ...She's been holding back [past] ...It just hurts [present]"

Last section: "He says he is sorry [present] ...He said that [past]... He loves it [present]"

Present tense is hard, I get it. Just read it through and identify all past tense verbs and change them accordingly. There were a few more jumps, but I can't be bothered to put them all down.

Apart from that, I loved this oneshot so, so, so, much; thankyou for bringing it into existance. 3

Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2016
That was depressing
justme chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
This is the third one shot I've read and liked. Im not really a fan of oneshots, so…

Anyway, this is beautiful. It's like some summary of a whole novel, but just as beautiful. The plot is simple. Any writer could've thought of something like that, but the difference is that you actually managed to write it down and in such a meaningful, flawless way. Thumbs up for this one!
annayh44 chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
AWWWW Sweet ...I LOVE IT! Ugh but boys are stupid
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
Still one of my favourites 3
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
that was amazing...i usually go for fluffier oneshots, but this is supernice...keep writing!


DenimKitty chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
Honestly this is amazing, I don't cry easily when I read but you can really feel the hurt and pain and just the emotion in this. Great job :)
naschelle chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
wow! amazing!
tizzledubs chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
holy smokes. i am in tears.
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