God, I actually cried. Well done!

It's been a long time since something made me feel this much.

very cute

i really got scared for a second but overall this was soooo good

Amazing story

Wow..She did great...I love happy endings..This is quite good as both of them tries their best.

I'm crying. Wah. My feeeeeeels.

I do have a little complaint though.

When I was reading this story through a second time, I realised that you jumped tenses a few times.

E.g.
Second last section: "She's been hurting [past] ...She's been holding back [past] ...It just hurts [present]"

Last section: "He says he is sorry [present] ...He said that [past]... He loves it [present]"

Present tense is hard, I get it. Just read it through and identify all past tense verbs and change them accordingly. There were a few more jumps, but I can't be bothered to put them all down.

Apart from that, I loved this oneshot so, so, so, much; thankyou for bringing it into existance. 3

-S

That was depressing

This is the third one shot I've read and liked. Im not really a fan of oneshots, so…

Anyway, this is beautiful. It's like some summary of a whole novel, but just as beautiful. The plot is simple. Any writer could've thought of something like that, but the difference is that you actually managed to write it down and in such a meaningful, flawless way. Thumbs up for this one!

AWWWW Sweet ...I LOVE IT! Ugh but boys are stupid

Still one of my favourites 3

that was amazing...i usually go for fluffier oneshots, but this is supernice...keep writing!

xoxo,

slay

Honestly this is amazing, I don't cry easily when I read but you can really feel the hurt and pain and just the emotion in this. Great job :)

wow! amazing!

holy smokes. i am in tears.
stunning.