oh, wow, this is achingly sweet:)

Awhh, that was just plainly adorable.

love this one shot it gets to you i was a bit teary

very sweet.

this made my eyes water. you're an amazing one-shot writer. i love your works!

The story was written in a very simple way, and yet it was very, very powerful. Even though there was barely any dialogue or description, I genuinely felt sad while reading this, because I could really feel the girl's pain. Heart-wrenching yet sweet - I loved it :]

Writing one-shots should be a legitimate profession. You'll be millionaire. :)

Wow, that was so sweet! I wanted to cry because it felt like I was the girl since you wrote her feelings so well. Great one-shot!

Aww, so cute!

that was cute.

I feel some familiarity from their situation and it makes me wonder how many misunderstandings there actually are without us knowing.

Great story!

i love the idea;

just watch for verb tense agreement.

"But he didn't.

She starts feeling depressed. Her arm is brushing his. She is doing this on purpose to gauge a reaction from him. To tease him. But he doesn't do anything.

"

you must say 'he doesn't'.

the music is blasting loud,

not 'blazing loud'

but yeah, it was cool (:

wow, i cried at 2am while reading this story! very well emotional, very touching. (: thanks for writing it!

I love this story. It is my favorite oneshot. I really like the way that this can really happen alot of oneshots are way to unrealistic. I like the way you made the characters like when you really look at the story she is all sugar and sweet and he is basically not. I like that. Keep on writing cuz I love all your stories.

BEAUTIFUL. THIS STORY IS GREAT. :)

very sweet...well written