this is one of my favourite one shots I've ever read... although I feel maybe the ending is a bit... unsatisfying? I don't know? I really love it despite that though, makes me cry every time I read it

If you're still reading reviews, he needs a kick up his backside!

Oh my gosh this is the cutest one shot I have ever read! I loved it!

You know, this makes me burst into tears every time I read it. A definite indication of just how brilliant you are. So beautiful and still so heart-breaking. I love it.

sad but really sweet, love it:)

Really loved it! It's cute! :D

i read dis long back nd here i am again love dis to d core god bless bang on stry happy tears all d way (:

Oh god. I just love this story so much. It's just so real and so full of emotion. I cry every time I read it, and after reading some of the other reviews, I know that I'm not alone in doing so. Stay awesome :) *sniffle*

This is beautiful. It made me cry the first time I read it.

This is so ADORABLE! I like the way it was written, very simply and elegantly, I think it added to the story. And I thought it was interesting that you didn't give them any names, but it didn't make it confusing, so that's good. This was just a really sweet one-shot. Jerk boyfriend didn't realize how much he loved his sweetheart girlfriend until she pulled back. Maybe he needed that. Anyway, great job! :D

I like this a lot. It's cute! You can tell an entire story in only one "chapter"!

I was literally holding back tears that was a very well written and emotional piece. I want to look into some of your other works now! :)

awwwwww(: this was cute and well wtten and the lack of names made it so much more real. great job(:

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE your story! I love how strong and stubborn the girl is about the realationship :) Good work ;)

You honestly don't know how much I live this story :'] I still cry everytime I read it. Tears are literally steeaming d