|Reviews for Erie|
| Peace Revolution chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
I think it flowed really well. Plus awesome choice of verbs.
| Awesome Albino chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
I thought it was good! I think that you used strong adjectives and verbs! You have a really good topic and if you made it longer, you would really have something amazing, I think!
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I really like it. Personally (and you don't have to do it, because it's fine the way it is) I would change the last line to: "as each wave crashes within me." But what you have there is fine. ] Peace.
| Valarie Needham chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
A little short, but otherwise it was good.