|Reviews for ten|
| La Terraza chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
damn good, damn good I say. I like it a lot.
| Rumikoholic chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
This is really good. I love the irreverent vibe of this poem.
| Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I like your poems [:
This one seems so scatterbrained and silly, but I like the few lines of solemnity thrown among the arguments for your sanity.
"things are going down;
like the faith I have in people,
and the corners of your mouth."
That part is my favorite.
You take trivial observations and turn them around to make them seem poetic.
| Liam02 chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
I like this a lot. It deals with dark matters without getting to dreary. It's got spunk.
then again, everything you write has spunk.
you're just spunky.
| Doxology chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
This says so much.
| happy-socks chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
this is amazing. quirky and has a wonderful flow to it.
i love it.
i can't even put it into words... i just love it.
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
It feels sort of like a song to me. Perhaps it's the flow, the rhyming, or just the words which placed together seem both poetry and melody. I don't know, but I did like it. I even liked your repetition of the first line in the last stanza, and I usually hate that. Great job.