Reviews for ten
La Terraza chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
damn good, damn good I say. I like it a lot.
Rumikoholic chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
This is really good. I love the irreverent vibe of this poem.
Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I like your poems [:

This one seems so scatterbrained and silly, but I like the few lines of solemnity thrown among the arguments for your sanity.

"things are going down;

like the faith I have in people,

and the corners of your mouth."

That part is my favorite.

You take trivial observations and turn them around to make them seem poetic.


Liam02 chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
I like this a lot. It deals with dark matters without getting to dreary. It's got spunk.

then again, everything you write has spunk.

you're just spunky.
Doxology chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
This says so much.


happy-socks chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
this is amazing. quirky and has a wonderful flow to it.

i love it.

i can't even put it into words... i just love it.

Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
It feels sort of like a song to me. Perhaps it's the flow, the rhyming, or just the words which placed together seem both poetry and melody. I don't know, but I did like it. I even liked your repetition of the first line in the last stanza, and I usually hate that. Great job.