damn good, damn good I say. I like it a lot.

This is really good. I love the irreverent vibe of this poem.

I like your poems [:

This one seems so scatterbrained and silly, but I like the few lines of solemnity thrown among the arguments for your sanity.

"things are going down;

like the faith I have in people,

and the corners of your mouth."

That part is my favorite.

You take trivial observations and turn them around to make them seem poetic.

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Katie

I like this a lot. It deals with dark matters without getting to dreary. It's got spunk.

then again, everything you write has spunk.

you're just spunky.

This says so much.

Cheers,

Doxology

this is amazing. quirky and has a wonderful flow to it.

i love it.

i can't even put it into words... i just love it.

:)

It feels sort of like a song to me. Perhaps it's the flow, the rhyming, or just the words which placed together seem both poetry and melody. I don't know, but I did like it. I even liked your repetition of the first line in the last stanza, and I usually hate that. Great job.