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![]() ![]() ![]() damn good, damn good I say. I like it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. I love the irreverent vibe of this poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your poems [: This one seems so scatterbrained and silly, but I like the few lines of solemnity thrown among the arguments for your sanity. "things are going down; like the faith I have in people, and the corners of your mouth." That part is my favorite. You take trivial observations and turn them around to make them seem poetic. _ Katie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this a lot. It deals with dark matters without getting to dreary. It's got spunk. then again, everything you write has spunk. you're just spunky. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This says so much. Cheers, Doxology |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is amazing. quirky and has a wonderful flow to it. i love it. i can't even put it into words... i just love it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It feels sort of like a song to me. Perhaps it's the flow, the rhyming, or just the words which placed together seem both poetry and melody. I don't know, but I did like it. I even liked your repetition of the first line in the last stanza, and I usually hate that. Great job. |